Comments by All Members
- "Thanks for sharing. rejection can leave us questioning the value of our very existence. ive always counted those that have walked out of my life to have done me a favor in the long run - even if it felt like my soul was crushed for a period of time. better than the prolonged pain of a septic relationship...good luck!"
Posted by mastadave2999 on "Wash It Down With Gin" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Omg i'm so this girl. so i will pop a pill and wash it down with gin.. hi new friend. join the stupid girls club of fanatical felines. we always have room for one more. i love this. if you eva need anything i'm around. i'll take a shot of gin with you ."
Posted by Devilish on "Wash It Down With Gin" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "This is a good one. People often portray something they are not, for multiple reasons. This one is nice for describing what seems on the outside may not always be true internally."
Posted by Deathkitten on "Reflection" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "I think this is your best one (my opinion). That's what pictures are for...sometimes it can escape us when it fades & then we have to ask ourselves is it as precise? Nice work. Keep writing. Welcome to DP :) "
Posted by Deathkitten on "Picture" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "This is truly remarkable, and you say none of your works are good? You know what, all of our styles are unique my dear and you're no exception, besides that's the beauty of poetry, we all portray it differently. Keep up the great work, cause I need to read some more. Thank you for sharing and take care =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "I really liked this felt as if i could relate i look forward to reading more of your work though i also think this could be a bit longer find out where it would go "
Posted by Unknown on "Dream" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "my own personal demon is the sylable count poem borrowed from the japanese, haiku (575) , and renku (57577) but i do break out of that occasionally ...
was displace the only rhyme that woudl work with embrace and convey the thought?"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Thanks, I just have this thing where it bothers me if a poem doesnt rhyme... I know that isnt right and there are alot of poems that are great that don't rhyme. It's just a thing I have, but deffinetly something I have to work on. Thank you for your comment! :)"
Posted by Intoxicating Delirium on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "mostly love the flow.. but rhyme scheme should be a tool *you* use, not sommat that uses you... "sense of displace" feels forced, twould be "sense of displacement" does not appear to be a sylable count.. know ye of the daemons known as "feet": namely "iamb" "troche" and the rest of that foul ilk?"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "we dream that we may know where we want to be in the future... or what we are working towards, or merely hope for... it is not for nothing that hope was one of the evils in pandora's box"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Dream" by Intoxicating Delirium
