Comments by All Members
- "I found the use of '...' in this poem quite interesting...felt as though the thoughts were dragging, some kind of weight, like chains linking the lines together uncomfortably, defining the theme of the poem. The image of 'grains pulling at me' is so striking, the sand itself pulling the self into uncountable shreds. Very evocative, feeling of inevitability. Thanks for writing :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Captured and Forgotten" by hopeless
- "Almost any words are good words. Even so much out of date it was good to read your work again."
Posted by Unknown on "trying again" by hopeless
- "Writing shouldn't always just come easily, or effortless. In fact, when you're really writing poetry, you're saying things that would be difficult to say, and maybe take some craft to get right, and a bit of courage to show. No shame here. Keep writing. Writing is hard. Some people make it look easy, but to do it right, it's hard."
Posted by Alanarchy on "trying again" by hopeless
- "keep trying. poetry can be found in the strangest places, in everything. i've been having trouble of my own...i agree...it is very sad and painful to know the loss of words."
Posted by bloody LOVEly on "trying again" by hopeless
- "I can't believe I've never read anything by you. Half way through this my mouth was dropping open and I was completely enthralled. I'm going to be reading a lot of your work now. This was torturously good."
Posted by Six-Out on "Quiet slumbers" by hopeless
- "nothing delves quite as deep as your works, they are delicately precise and so full of emotion i feel weighted beneath your poems, surrounded by your melancholy words"
Posted by Anth on "Quiet slumbers" by hopeless
- "You are sweet to ask, but i do not know. but thank you, i write only what my heart tells me and what my mind paints."
Posted by hopeless on "Quiet slumbers" by hopeless
- "Where did you learn to speak with such a dark tongue? I just can't help but be curious as to how many beds of broken glass and hot coals, you've been raked across?! Your work is amazing."
Posted by Unknown on "Quiet slumbers" by hopeless
- "this smoothes through uncetyain fissures and then is like gopld paper crumpled, my head tormented from it's abundance of excellent imagery and deft concise approach..wonderful post!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Quiet slumbers" by hopeless
- "a moment caught and frozen perfectly...the pain pours out of this piece and it read so flawlessly ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "I will play this once" by hopeless
- "I to have lost my way but that is where my friends have stepped up to help find a better way of life instead of living in fear of my own shadow.. But this poem has inspired me to step my life up another notch.."
Posted by Unknown on "I've Lost My Way Again" by hopeless
- "I find this poem to be touching and it refers back to how I have felt into how my life has led up to now...."
Posted by Unknown on "Dignity" by hopeless
- "impacted me, "Not even immobility to
console"...Aimlessly searching for a single star amongst
Universes ...such deep grasp of things almost unbearable but by the beauty in which you form them"
Posted by Anth on "Dignity" by hopeless
- "god, the intensity of this piece, calm like something distant burning,some incredible lines here that really "
Posted by Anth on "Dignity" by hopeless
- "i utterly adore this work,so many things in the way you describe it just stand out so vividly and beautiful, sublime"
Posted by Anth on "Imperfectly Beautiful" by hopeless
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