Comments by All Members
- "Pardon my coarse introduction, I'm such a kibbitzer! You are the boss and we do have several poets who regularly dabble in olde English. Welcome again and you are most gracious, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "Damned" by Deathkitten
- "simple yet not.. it says so much and so few words.. nicely done! thanks for sharing!"
Posted by Unknown on "Words" by Deathkitten
- "Yeah I can really see what you mean. Many people don't think before they talk, and what they don't know, is that it can really hurt someone....
Very beautiful poetry!"
Posted by Unknown on "Words" by Deathkitten
- "I think we all know the feeling of having something said and not hearing a thing. "
Posted by SaintNHB on "Words" by Deathkitten
- "@Dwells- It was necessary for me. It's my poem & preference. I don't believe I was limited to certain words. I guess it wasn't necessary back then. I like older styles honestly & use it in my material at times. Sorry you didn't dig it. I'm an atheist, it wasn't in any biblical sense. Thanks for the welcome. It's lovely here."
Posted by Deathkitten on "Damned" by Deathkitten
- "Love it and the rhyme scheme really adds effect. Personally, I like that you used thee and thy, as it really sets the mood. It almost reminds me of the way an ancient curse would be written, which is cool."
Posted by Unknown on "Damned" by Deathkitten
- "Not sure the thee and thy was necessary but the ending was a great metaphor and welcome to DP!"
Posted by dwells on "Damned" by Deathkitten
- "Haha- I can quite imagine this being spiteful told to someone, the one being interrogated that is, such a serious scene yet for some reason, it has this vague humor to it, a dark one at that. I just love the last line... as we all do.... "Don't you ever underestimate me." Cheers for the read ;)"
Posted by Symbol on "Interrogation" by Deathkitten
- "Life can be hell, no matter how beaten and broken we fall, we must just brace it all and keep heading forwards. One just wishes for the release from such a crooked world, a world so mean. This is excellent, well worth a rated ten. Cheery-o :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Little girl" by Deathkitten
- "This is some wicked evil here, laced in such chilling words. Wonderful imagery wanders my mind from such a short piece... Nicely done ^ ^ Cheers for the read~ Write on!"
Posted by Symbol on "Souless" by Deathkitten
- "Very powerful poem you have here! It hits real close to home for me, too. Seems like I could be that very child, broken and wanting nothing more but love and happiness that never came. Wonderful job! Welcome to DP, I hope you have a nice long stay with us :)"
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "Little girl" by Deathkitten
