Comments by All Members
- "wow to let your fingers do the walkin' sounds like a plan to me. love the willow tree, though it is a bitch at the end of the summer, it sprouts so easy all over the grass."
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Weeping Willow" by Deathkitten
- "this flows quite nicely... I find it has a very open meaning as well making it easy to relate to... fine work."
Posted by Unknown on "Swallow" by Deathkitten
- " This is good work, it evoked the memory of fragrant flowers and such.I'm glad I was not in a bad mood when I read this, otherwise I don't know if I could appreciate it.For the type of poem it is, it is perfect.(10)"
Posted by Ortolan on "Weeping Willow" by Deathkitten
- "This is laced with eroticism but comes across as more about fear of something unknown. Regardless, I loved the fractured use of word and rhyme."
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Swallow" by Deathkitten
- "Yes to all the above. And have come close to the leap. Very dark , disturbing piece about what a lot of us have felt through the years. Very good pen . "
Posted by Markus Darkscribe on "Have you ever?" by Deathkitten
- "Wow!! talk about a rollar coaster ride of emotions. i love it. and all the tags to go with it make this perfect .. hello there you . "
Posted by Devilish on "Never despair" by Deathkitten
- "A fantastic commentary of inner torment. I can relate to this on so many levels.
Dark metaphor and internal discontent abound.
Great read. "
Posted by Unknown on "My Decay" by Deathkitten
- "Wow! Impressed you took the time to break it down & understand the meaning (in such a precise manner). Thank you, sir, for reading :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Fury" by Deathkitten
- "Hmm, the fury of a scorned woman?!
I have two stirrings of emotions in me which exercise your lines & words now right to me ... emotional coolness, a chilly & cold personality ... & between the lines ... & also determines your intention ... rage / fury. Honestly said I don't want to be the one ... whom it relates ... w/ in your text ... & wish I'm not standing in front of you ...
I like the rhythm & the seemingly random, but certainly intentional rhymes ... my favorite line is "chain reactions on the rise" ... this says essentially all about your something else, but impressive, meaningful poem ... & of course the last line as your statement ... dispute or war wouldn't I want have w/ you ... No, thank you ... but thanks for your poem! ;)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Fury" by Deathkitten
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