Comments by All Members
- "This is horrible. A horrible reality written plainly. A scene played out a thousand times but it never seems to lose its sense of morbid fascination. Humans are creatures of war."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The Killing Fields" by DarkPaladine
- "I came from a familey that was in most of our wars so yes I am very patriotic. But our military is not the only heros that we have. There are others out there just like you. Thank you for your kind words."
Posted by DarkPaladine on "American Heros" by DarkPaladine
- "It really feels like the answer sometimes but you just have to think about the people you care most about when i used to think about it i would think of my nieces and nephews and them growing up without me and as much pain and hurt that i had that was always worse it always gets better just keep your head up"
Posted by Unknown on "Thoughts Of Suicide" by DarkPaladine
- "This is crazy... it flows nicely and sounds like something taken right out of a newspaper and put to verse. I do hope this did not happen to a friend or someone you knew but know this was very much worth the read. - Adam"
Posted by Adam on "No Blanket" by DarkPaladine
- "i love the US military
i support the troops and oppose anyone who hate them
thank you for writing this its truely amazing"
Posted by Unknown on "American Heros" by DarkPaladine
- "completely agree with everyone here...this is a great accomplishment thats really going to have peoples heads on a loop...great writing. thank you for writing this, someone had to get this poem down...thank you for doing that "
Posted by Unknown on "Drive Drunk" by DarkPaladine
- "i must agree with this write. it is on a topic of controversy and religouse debate in the extreem, but as one that has dealt with death personally multiple times, and yet still able to be here and talk of it, i can say that there is more trueth in this peic then i think you might acctually understand. you dee, if fully realized and recognized, death is a thing to look forward too. it is in a way like being imortal, while being mortal. just because you die, doesnt mean you are goen. 10 lives later, i know this. i congradulate you on this write, it is very intrigueing. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "What is Death" by DarkPaladine
- "Thank you for your kind words. The Zombie sleeps in us all and is always ready to fight and kill when pushed into it.
I have met mine once to often"
Posted by DarkPaladine on "Rage of the Zombie" by DarkPaladine
- "nice. perfect ending. i loved how you referred to it as a "zombie" haven't come across that before. very nice read. we love and fear the zombie"
Posted by RubyXero on "Rage of the Zombie" by DarkPaladine
- "Thank you for your kind words. Yes the Zombie is in us all and it sits their and waits to be released. We all try to pretend that he does not live in me but he does. Watch him appear when someone cuts you off in traffic. Or spills something on you at a party."
Posted by DarkPaladine on "Zombie Man" by DarkPaladine
- "Dark Valkyrie. Thank you for your kind words. I have read some of your poems and I really liked Stranded on a Scare. We all have a scar that life has given us wheather its inside or out we all have them. Very good poem"
Posted by DarkPaladine on "Zombie Man" by DarkPaladine
- "Very creative piece DP, you embodied everything the zombie man is in this write. WHile reading this I thought about Jason from he series Friday the 13th. Also I thought that the structure made sence cause the zombie man could be anywhere at any given time so you also did a great job with that. Thank you for sharing this piece with us here on DP =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Zombie Man" by DarkPaladine
- "Oh how sad.. Always think ..such as before you speak..you will regret may decisions..no less here..Really great and eye opening write..You did so well on covering such a common catastrophe..Thanks"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Drive Drunk" by DarkPaladine
- "Thank you my Lady. I am in the SCA and I write about the folks who were and are dressing up as knights and lords and ladies of the renassiance. If you like this one please read the battle between Knights and Dragons. Yours truly Darkpaladine"
Posted by DarkPaladine on "The story of Loric and Diana" by DarkPaladine
- "I enjoyed this piece very much. It's so rare to find such a story these days. Damsels, kings, knights, heroes, they're all so neglected. This was a refreshing read. A well executed, classic tale. Nice write."
Posted by wilted on "The story of Loric and Diana" by DarkPaladine
- "I always try, a lot less eloquently to express this to people... I'll just have to send them this poem from now on. This is such a difficult topic to write about, and very hard to successfully get a message across. But you pull it all off. This sends pangs of pain through me as it reminds me events from my past - a sign of a very well written work."
Posted by wilted on "Drive Drunk" by DarkPaladine
- "It's all very simple when you think in terms of "me".It gets a little more complicated when you think of "them".More so, when you think of "us".Losing "us"...the picture never fades.I don't drink and drive..."us" is far too important.Thank you."
Posted by Honey on "Drive Drunk" by DarkPaladine
- "pretty interesting. Driving drunk is a big deal and it's sad that so many still do it without considering the potential consequences"
Posted by RubyXero on "Drive Drunk" by DarkPaladine
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