Comments by All Members
- "Whoa and it sounds like an Ent gone bad maybe? Think I might have seen this tree on Monty Python's Holy Grail maybe - a great visual you bring to life Cipher, well done."
Posted by dwells on "Tree Of Corpse's" by Strataic
- "nice imagination at work with this one. reminds me of tim burtons sleepy hallow tree. hopefully your not destined for that tree! awesome cipher, great poem."
Posted by haunted on "Tree Of Corpse's" by Strataic
- "Interesting and captivating poem...I will have to read more of your works..."
Posted by Unknown on "Slumber" by Strataic
- "Petals unfolding with a morose romance.. evoked the same horror and tender aching love in me that Poe does... derelict classicism. so elegant.. made me feel vulnerable as i do with my hands and legs bound, my lover's breath on my neck, his kiss on my forehead. the art of succumbing, the ravaged beauty in submission.. I realize this has nothing to do with the context, but it evoked that nostalgia in me.. that need for gifting myself blindly and without hesitation.. Thank you. I found serenity in the somber passage of this."
Posted by Unknown on "Slumber" by Strataic
- ""Whilst many comprehend
...Evolution...
We drink tea." So many things to be enjoyed over a hot cuppa, like this poem... Excellent job you two, hope to see more. I'm not sane, but I was lured into your hallucination and had a nice ride - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Incidental (Feat. Symbol)" by Strataic
- "This is very beautiful and elegant. You always manage to get that perfect "mystic" about your words. The last lines ended this poem exquisitely, like it was finally the intertwining of two broken hearts to make a whole " Allow my
Jungle vines.
To bind us in forever’s time." Brilliant work. Worth a bookmark I say so. And a glorious ten :) "
Posted by Symbol on "Too Few Words" by Strataic
- "haunting visuals, and dream...love the simplicity, yet complexity of it all... a portent perhaps?"
Posted by natalie on "Slumber" by Strataic
- "I love the dark surrounding...your imagery is good- A fleck of peach
Amidst placid weather
Winter is forever...My favorite part of the poem...Thank you for sharing your art..."
Posted by Unknown on "Slumber" by Strataic
- "Wow.. this was definitely worth the time. hello there you . welcome to darkpoetry.. if you need anything i'm a click away. roam around and read others as it will bring them back to you as well.."
Posted by Devilish on "Slumber" by Strataic
- "...awed... This was a beautiful and hunting metaphor for me. Welcome to DP :) - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Slumber" by Strataic
- "I love it! Nicely penned and welcome to the valley... if ya ever need anything inbox me! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Slumber" by Strataic
- "...desolate & darkly lyrical. what dolorous dreams this slumber might bestow..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Slumber" by Strataic
- "Perfect imagery here.Your words melted into my slumber... stirring an eerie silence...The gentle flow of it with it's hint of creepy crawlies. :) Cheers for the read Cipher- Welcome to DP."
Posted by Symbol on "Slumber" by Strataic
