Comments by All Members
- "is it the word that is born of music... or music that is born of the word... the birth of poetry through the spirit of word (the birth of tragedy through the spirit of music)... it seems as if the words constitute the 'you' to the point of perfection, as if taking the place or creating. and all the words will never make such perfection... well past the dictionary we are still lacking the sound to capture the person, as poetry is seeks to uncover that which evades expression. thanks, much enjoyed
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Posted by The Dybbuk on "of songs that were meant for paper" by eidos
- "I agree with cotton, a very complete thought, like a musing in one sitting, almost conversational, but still pleasant enough to call it poetry. This is your style, I'd be willing to bet, and it shows."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "of songs that were meant for paper" by eidos
- "How beautiful. I like to think of words as sonorous beings all by their selves. This had a sweet internal sound to it and I like the format like it came pouring as one complete thought, fluid."
Posted by Unknown on "of songs that were meant for paper" by eidos
- "Almost sounds like selective memory, or to a grater extent, nostalgia. How we only remember the things that we really want to, and blot out everything else, creating a sort of idyllic and hazy flashback. You've impressed many here, it seems, and I am one of them."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "the understanding of time travel" by eidos
- "this was brilliant!! you have worded an unspoken understanding that plagues us all in one relationship or another. i love how your mind works! cudos to you!! please keep them coming."
Posted by natalie on "the understanding of time travel" by eidos
- "such a beautiful tragedy. it is so true that the painful things outshine the things we once loved when love deceives. thank you for sharing your pain.(hope things get better soon) and welcome to the dark valley."
Posted by natalie on "serenades in static" by eidos
- "brilliantly placed observations , albeit somewhat depressing ... pack up your memories before the delusion sets in ... it takes a long time to get to know a person ... another great piece , thanks"
Posted by kinkifrog on "the understanding of time travel" by eidos
- "reminds me of how we fall for a front instead of a person... that mask we all wear in one way or another that we first show to start a relationship. Its not really us, its not really them that we fall in love with, not at first. great write..."
Posted by Unknown on "the understanding of time travel" by eidos
- "heh... excellent... an observation that cannot be seen. Do we ever think of anyone as who they really are, or are we not always creating an idea of who we think or who we want someone to be... and when they're gone, is it not all the easier to recreate them as we always wished they were... like plato observed in the divided line analogy, we create our world from the slices of perception that are always singular and incomplete... thanks for the thoughtful words, much enjoyed. *bows* "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "the understanding of time travel" by eidos
- "I've read a few of your works now and this is my first comment but.you are really something and this is really something. It gives a feeling a can't quite describe...failed optimism perhaps? But I enjoy this feeling, having it from your words. Welcome to dp. I look forward to more."
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "the understanding of time travel" by eidos
- "I got a sense of an artist who measured their own worth by the quality or acceptance of their 'art' , whatever it may be...in the way that a chef is only as good as his last meal ... an artist can feel ineffectual , invalid or even a failure , if they define themselves with their creations ... I enjoy your work to date ... welcome to dp :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "brass and bruises" by eidos
- "I've read all of your work thus far, and remain just as impressed with this, and the ending echoes as if it were written into law by the ancients. One line can't define a person, sometimes, not even an epic can. I agree with Dyb, very philosophical, therefore, very welcome here."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "in between the speech and the being." by eidos
- "hmmm... I like the circuity of imagery here, the simile and the man who embodies it even as he speaks of what he is... nicely done, and the brief repetition gave it the storyteller tone... enjoyed. thank you."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "sunbursts and words that mean nothing." by eidos
- "I like your work. so philosophical... between the word and the person.... a gaping, yawning canyon of sorts... logos... word/being united... identity, an ever changing nexus of 'same' and difference... I had a puppy once ... much enjoyed, thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "in between the speech and the being." by eidos
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