Comments by All Members
- "My heart literally is aching for you right now after reading this. I am so sorry that you had to go through this. beautifully written poem"
Posted by Unknown on "3AM" by archangelmichael
- "Excellent flow of rhyming going one here! I think this poem is the perfect way to describe what an out of control vampire might be thinking. Doesn't want to hurt anyone, but can't help but listen to this obsessed and thirsty voice inside himself, persuading him. Chilling, yet sad at the same time. Bravo on a wicked vampire piece. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Thirst" by archangelmichael
- "It would have been nice if this were a work of fiction. We've all gone through tough times you and I, I'm still trying to cope with mine at that, with some days being better than others. This must have taken a lot out of you, writing it is one thing but to reread it is to practically relive it. Thanks for sharing with u here on DP though and, take care of yourself"
Posted by Gray Vision on "3AM" by archangelmichael
- "" I have felt all things, the only truth is pain".. i felt that line.. the entire poem is a feeling i know all to well..however i have to disagree with somethings.. joy does exist and you will find it someday.. love does not simply crumble although I haven't found a love that hasn't crumbled i refuse to believe tru love doesn't exist! Lovely write, i like your works! "
Posted by Unknown on "My Secret ... My addiction" by archangelmichael
- "this is so full of pain and heartache.. it brought tears to my eyes.. i'm so sorry for what you have been through and your loss. .nicely penned and thank you for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "3AM" by archangelmichael
- "the heart is like a child, always want a parents attention. Take care of your heart and it is okay to dwell but don't let it define you. :)"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "3AM" by archangelmichael
- "Oooo. A deathly piece indeed, Nicely executed. First thing that came to mind whilst reading this was "Vampire" A hungry one at that. With a lonesome air to it. Great piece and welcome to Dark Poetry :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Death's Kiss" by archangelmichael
- "I hate the wee hour heartache, its when the mind wanders most and your heart reveals its most pain. So sorry for your lost. Good heartfelt poem."
Posted by Electric-Chair on "3AM" by archangelmichael
- "Have you ever heard the song "hey lucy" by skillet? It may ake you feel worse, I don't know. But this was beautiful. I'm sorry you had to make use of this sort of pain. Nobody deserves this, least of all you."
Posted by Unknown on "3AM" by archangelmichael
- "I know exactly how you feel, I've been there, not too long ago. A delightful write, I can feel the pain as if it's my own. Welcome to DP, you ever need a friend, or somebody to just listen I'm only a message away."
Posted by Unknown on "My Secret ... My addiction" by archangelmichael
- "Well the title does go perfect with the work its self.. Cool .. Hello there and welcome to darkpoetry. roam around and read others as it will lead them back to you as well.. if you eva need anything i'm a click away.."
Posted by Devilish on "Death's Kiss" by archangelmichael
