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- "Even though you know it's the fall, not sure you can ever prepare for a rock bottom land. When you find yourself in such a place, the good new is you've got nowhere to go but up! Good luck."
Posted by mastadave2999 on "The Beast Inside" by devilsrighthand
- "mice are cute. *gives your heart a full body cast* it'll be better in no time. this is good, royce. interesting choice of metaphor, thoroughly explored. potent feeling."
Posted by Unknown on "The Baby Mouse" by devilsrighthand
- "This takes me back to a much younger, angrier part of my life...sometimes its good to reminisce...perhaps this is just what I needed. "
Posted by Ravenblade on "The Baby Mouse" by devilsrighthand
- "well this made me feel near empty inside. I too used to imagine what a more hermit like lifestyle, in tune with nature, may look and feel like for me. Unfortunately, nature and I have never bonded in the sense I feel it leads to peace for you. Well done young sir poet..."
Posted by Ravenblade on "The Lost One" by devilsrighthand
- "Amazing and short you really came up within 30 seconds?
good work and wonderful write love the use of the baby mouse and the eagle "
Posted by Unknown on "The Baby Mouse" by devilsrighthand
- "Well this poem just resounds in my head over and over, I love the metaphors and the fact you described the way that people with power or people that are plain ff ups treat others....indeed a talon of an eagle.
Great piece, really enjoyed reading it!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Baby Mouse" by devilsrighthand
- "aww Mousie ... interesting how you changed your voice to third person towards the end, as though distancing yourself from the final act ... your flash of inspiration produced a poignant lil allegory... thanks righthandmouse :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Baby Mouse" by devilsrighthand
- "i like it i like the flow the metphore is a good one see you shouldn't doubt yourself becase you are good i look forward to more by you
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Posted by Unknown on "The Baby Mouse" by devilsrighthand
- "I'm just going to grab a pillow, nice and carefully……and start punching the shit out of it! This poem is epic, I'm envious of you because I can't write short and sweet for my life lol. This is the exact feeling I get when I think everyone has their own agenda about me and I love the symbolism at the start; spewing of lies and flowing out like swarms of flies = pure genius! Keep writing!"
Posted by Unknown on "DIE" by devilsrighthand
- "I used to dream of such a life when I was a kid , so I wouldn't have to go to school, but my special place had an old lighthouse on the headland... I can understand your need to escape and the allure of such a dream ... hang in there righthandman , I have plenty more hooks :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Lost One" by devilsrighthand
- "I can completely 100% relate to this right now. You have mirrored my situation so perfectly it's scary. Very nice and thank you for reminding me I'm not the only person that feels this way. "
Posted by Carmen Jade on "DIE" by devilsrighthand
- "I know exactly how you feel. Sometimes I just hate everyone. I can understand those days. I try not to let people get to me but I get tired of all the lying, cheating, backstabbing, and corruption. I think we all get tired of it every now and then. I like short but powerful poems like this. They're always a pleasure to read."
Posted by Rowan on "DIE" by devilsrighthand
- "This seems very reminiscent...days I would rather not remember...thank you for sharing. Its the small victories we need to celebrate, don't worry about the journey as long as you can see shelter every now and then..."
Posted by Ravenblade on "The Beast Inside" by devilsrighthand
- "Oh man, I dont know what to say Ive never read a poem quite like this. I could very easily say the wrong thing so I guess I'll say this. I've sacrificed myself to preserve my own humanity in a similar story, in the past. Once you build that character in yourself, you will always have it, and people will see it, and these stories will end. Just remember to be the smart one. Great write friend. D&A "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "The Beast Inside" by devilsrighthand
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