Comments by All Members
- "I throughly enjoyed this part
"gotta get that void full
that clock ticks shrill
that clock it kills"
I like this so much because we as the human race do this to ourselves, we are in pain and we always look for escape from that pain. Thank you for sharing, you're a gifted writer. DH"
Posted by Divine hell on "A Void" by Clydes_Bonnie
- "I can see it..
And I've smiled..
This image is a strange place to find beauty; but I have felt it as well.
^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Dusty Puppet" by Clydes_Bonnie
- "I am enamored with the way you break down your views and visions. Pick and sift through the pieces, and recollect them into a rhythm. Its talent like this that always drew me here. Consider me a fan"
Posted by Lab Rat on "A Blood Kissed Cigarette" by Clydes_Bonnie
- "Nothin' like a good shotgun blast to bring all the smiley, charmy, smarmy bullshite to heel. An offbeat wisdom within your words. Too often I forget to keep my paper thin kingdoms away from the open flames..."
Posted by Unknown on "Egocentric Distancing" by Clydes_Bonnie
- "...where did you come from with those last 2 lines! I'd swear I've seen them in every broken heart poem ever w/o them actually being there. someone else already said 'killer.' she's freakin right..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Drunk Lips Don't Fib" by Clydes_Bonnie
- "Ouch! Straight up. Love comes easy for some. Others find it impossible. There is something dangerous in the personality of this piece, mysterious but honest & biting. There is grit here. Appreciated muchly, Clydes. "
Posted by Unknown on "Silly Rabbit" by Clydes_Bonnie
- "I like how you constructed this thought. There is a trance-like quality. I love the word "hostage", & am always searching for an excuse to nab a few. It's a fun game. There is another life to begin with each dawn, perhaps. Thanks for the words, Clydes. "
Posted by Unknown on "Trance" by Clydes_Bonnie
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