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- "Hello,
thanks my friend -- shinny pearl-- very nice of you.
yes I agree-- if only."
Posted by roxx777 on "Deepest You" by roxx777
- "Smokin', thanks - and I need to brush up on some of my Indian philosophical terminology, but I get your drift. Great tribute to some lucky guy."
Posted by dwells on "Deepest You" by roxx777
- "im sorry i would of swore i saw you had no poems, i thought you were new! my bad, but hell welcome anyway!"
Posted by haunted on "Deepest You" by roxx777
- "mmm, that is sexy and erotic but yet it feels very beautiful and dark. this is a fantastic poem, you have skills. i loved it. its definitely a pleasure reading. and welcome to dark poetry!"
Posted by haunted on "Deepest You" by roxx777
- "Bongles hangs from your lips and wishes the reply comment was even longer. Never say goodbye, just let the silence be. There are so many possible interpretations, yet I find beauty in yours. By all means, bleed some more ink! :)"
Posted by lordbongo on " Transcendence of a womans desire " by roxx777
- "Thank you, I enjoy very much this type of expression.. As far as my angel, he is gone from my life, that is neither good or bad. I don't write anymore how I suffer angel dust was for him to understand how much I needed him, I don't have a need to put that out as much now I think because I feel grateful to have known love like I did. Many people talk about love and well I just thnk it's personal for the most part. I love beauty inside and out and for me to have felt how I did there was just that perfect balance. His silience is more positive to me than sorrow because this man is of such a value to me, he never lied to me or mislead me in anyway no matter if I asked him things, there were never any harsh words between us, he was such a man that It was easy to be a woman with him. That is priceless to me, I did realize that our paths were about to break and I could not have him in my life like I wanted so much, I am not unrealistic or obessesive because that is selfish and that is not love, true love is more about sacrifice of ones own desires for the happiness of another. I know what I want more than anything from him and that was to feel as if I was special to him in some way and he has done that, his silence is not a curse to me it is a gift telling me he cares enough not to hurt me and say goodbye. Sorry for a long reply our parting is still fresh and I have so much inside of me that needs to come out, thanks again for reading and your comments :)"
Posted by roxx777 on " Transcendence of a womans desire " by roxx777
- "This is another intriguing work with very original imagery.
It is written in a nonchalant way, yet powerful and full of meaning.
Your desire to perfectly please your angel.
Well done! Write on.
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Posted by lordbongo on " Transcendence of a womans desire " by roxx777
- "Thank you, I appreciate your thoughts on this poem and that you took the time to read it.:)
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Posted by roxx777 on "Angelic Dust" by roxx777
- "Though love for me is gone, this poem brings me back to a time when I thought like this. It is very well written. "
Posted by Unknown on "Return To Me" by roxx777
- "The peeling burnt walls, display the pieces of my love within the deepest me, the smoke dances
I LOVED THIS LINE..this lovelorn story leaves an ache inside me..:("
Posted by Unknown on "Angelic Dust" by roxx777
- "Ey, thanks for taking the time to reply. I kept checking if you would and finally you did. I do understand a bit how it feels. When you lose love for whatever reason there is nothing but pain, an endless longing that strangles you into tears. You will never be the same, once you were touched by it. I lost my first true love and any relation after that was just fake. I had girlfriends because I felt I was supposed to. I didn’t really love any of them. I was dwelling in the beauty & magic that I had lost. Till a day came and some girl said it wasn’t fair. How can she compete with a flawless dead girl. After those words, I slowly allowed myself to love another. I am not saying what I went through is the same, but I see some similarities. But your angel still walks amongst the living...Keep writing. I will come back for more. :)"
Posted by lordbongo on "bête noire" by roxx777
- "Hey thanks for your thoughts, I want to tell you in a way that you would understand because a lot of people don't.They think it is easy for me because they judge me for my looks or how I act or whatever. I know what I want and it is not easy to find obviously because my idea of love was just asking too much, so I felt that love was just skipping me or teasing me with wasted relationships and I just thought it was never for me. I know what it is to be wanted and that is it. I found my dream, a man that that I could open my heart to and feel free to love for the first time. To feel good about who I was with him, something that was missing alot in my past relationships. I call him my angel because don't laugh, he is very beautiful his looks are like that of an angel his face especially and body. Because of what I do for a living I work out and take care of myself so its important to me for a man to be fit not a beast just in shape, but that wouldn't be enough to make me fall in love trust me on this. His heart is more beautiful, he is very genuine something i want very much in a man very hard to find. We connected in a way that was too good just like a dream and there is so much I could say believe me but there isn't enough words to describe it. We had to part, and the flask is his life, he is royal he does not suffer as I do, He has alot going for him like a king does, I was his perfect match, but now his silence kills me each day, we had to part because of our jobs. But he just disappeared nothing there anymore, I feel as you said like a black spot on his past, I don't know it is strange that it came this way only to leave me like this. I will never be the same person so ignorant of loves power. My heart keeps hoping when I ask it not to, I feel like I am suffocating slowly at times, like I will lose my breath and die. Don't know what else to say, it sounds so dramatic, but this has taught not to think I know what life has in it. It is a mystery to me but whatever happend to me with this man runs so deep into my soul, I feel it on the tip of my tongue at times but it's insane what comes up, he reminds me of things that are so dear to me, a love that I have longed for since i can remember, my brother that past away, my father his personality, myself in away that I never thought i could be like, it was like watching another person oh if you ony knew. Well I think I have wrote you alot, but your comment was the most interesting because you seemed to understand to a degree my pain. Thanks for sharing:)"
Posted by roxx777 on "bête noire" by roxx777
- "Thank you, I appreciate your feedback oops on the typos, I like to write on here, but when you hit save it's done, lol glad I fixed it:) "
Posted by roxx777 on "bête noire" by roxx777
- "I think the imagery in this is nice, the seductive selection of words, but it has a few typos, too... no apostrophe in 'it's' in the first line; there seems to be a word missing in "it silky touch" silky has no 'e', "jester's court" maybe or "gesture's court" if you're looking to create a neologism of sorts and combine dissimilar words for effect... "dance hard this I 'know'" etc... but the imagery is very nice, the awakening, the creation of beauty within the act of this meeting, very captivating in that sense. thanks and welcome to the valley."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "bête noire" by roxx777
- "HMmm...my take may be quite wrong but here goes: you are a lady with a past and the new man in your life won't give you his attentions (he works night shift?). Just a guess on this intriguing piece, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "bête noire" by roxx777
- "I am intrigued. I read this piece 6 times, trying to absorb the meaning. You are nothing but a stupid black spot on the past of your lover? A relationship that ended abruptly? Is it death that whispers your name now? Maybe the one you want to return died, maybe it was suicide? The royal flask of poison? Maybe I am getting it all wrong. I will revisit and check comments of the others or maybe yourself... "
Posted by lordbongo on "bête noire" by roxx777
