Comments by All Members
- "Mmm, this brought back memories of my first love: Carol Reddenburch. She was a lovely lass who captivated my heart and soul. You have conveyed every feeling I had for her in your work. Beautiful portrayal. I hope everything comes to you."
Posted by Loketha Angel on "waiting for you" by danica mcdonald
- "HOw do you shut out the white noise of the world around us, when the loudest sounds come from within? Perhaps that is the question, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "silence" by danica mcdonald
- "Does conjure up quite the image and I can feel it oozing from the page as I read, excellent."
Posted by dwells on "anger" by danica mcdonald
- "LOvely.. So soft and sensual.. Thank you. A bit different from the hard core... Nice to know people still feel this way.."
Posted by Devilish on "sex" by danica mcdonald
- "Hi DMD perhaps "all comes flooding back" to prevent a mixed metaphor in the last line. For some reason this made me want to burn one again, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "cancer stick" by danica mcdonald
- "I think I told you this story before but you deleted all of your old posts. I knew a girl that looked just like you. We used to go fishing with friends. I wish that I had asked her out. We lost touch and years later I got a wedding anouncement with no return address. I always feel bad about losing my old friends."
Posted by Unknown on "voices" by danica mcdonald
- "I wrote a poem with this same title last year.
I wonder how many other have also. I hope things are better for you now. "
Posted by Unknown on "fuck you" by danica mcdonald
- "I think perhaps "Sub Par" might be a better title, was this really the best you could come up with DMD? (HA) - joking mi'lady, this was great in its intrensity and honesty and really strike a nerve that resides somewhere in the unfunny bone, thanks, good one!"
Posted by dwells on "fuck you" by danica mcdonald
- "The inner voice knows and can be quite persistant, infused with centuries of fact and fable towards one goal, survival. You could do much worse in counsel, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "voices" by danica mcdonald
