Comments by All Members
- ""deaths of innocent beauty/his craving and his want" u could have used 'wont'...i'm sure it would have created more of a lustful, suspenseful feel with that word and it wouldn't have fucked up what u were trying to say. Good work...cuz there can never be enough gore!
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Posted by devilspoet on "Marquis de Sade" by alesana
- "I used to know this feeling before the knees went. Sounds like a runner to me (never call them joggers). Thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Runner's High" by alesana
- "nice description, intense... I wonder what it would sound like written in the first person... "there is no life alive... as powerful as I".... maybe... just a thought. thanks"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Runner's High" by alesana
- "oh yeah...it's worth it for the rush...though jogging is not my thing...exercise to the max then shower down...mmm like a drug...I like your depiction here..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Runner's High" by alesana
- "very unique .. i liked your writings very much here ... but the presentation made me *dizzy* im sorry =(( "
Posted by Corinthian on "Runner's High" by alesana
- "very interestin. always has vivid details and it was just simply an amazin poem. loved it. its full of amazin raw emotion and yet very little remorse at the thought of bringing pain"
Posted by Invisibledarkness on "Your Last Breath" by alesana
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