Comments by All Members
- "Ok dwells i see your point... And fine... your right... That --ck... would have killed the wright. Didn't have to be filthy to be dirty... But I like playin in the mud =(... Good job EVIL!!! "
Posted by Devilish on "passions" by Evil Ash
- "So that was you looking in my bedroom window last night! Well done all around and without a ...ck to be found."
Posted by dwells on "passions" by Evil Ash
- "Had i been a guy they could of called me a two minute man cause i was ready to in the first few lines!!! Perfect name for this... Makes me wonder if i have any cause im sorta a fast paced female... guess sometimes I should slllloooow it down... Nice!"
Posted by Devilish on "passions" by Evil Ash
- "*Blows a kiss to you* The only way to subside a beast is to release it, even with softness... I'm right here for you when ever you need a friend..."
Posted by Devilish on "hearts alone" by Evil Ash
- "Hey E.A. - glad I don't have to do your laundry and I'd recommend a stress test for that heart condition. Seriously, got me thinking in several different directions through the entire piece; with a bit of confessional near the end - very nice."
Posted by dwells on "moment in pain" by Evil Ash
- "A collage of thoughts, working together at standing alone...as the mind plays and labours. Your writing is getting stronger as you do. Don't stop."
Posted by Amaryllis on "moment in pain" by Evil Ash
- "thanks kinki:) ..it was something i felt i wanted to write ..i relly dont expect anyone to get it ..but im glad you understand
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Posted by Evil Ash on "moment in pain" by Evil Ash
- "...like a newsreel of experiences, well captured...some cool original lines in here I really feel...good one...I like this a lot..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "moment in pain" by Evil Ash
- "Too many images for me to comprehend without a six pack (or two); if ever. Maybe it's just me but you sling adjectives and phrases around like weapons, in a tour de force destined for the ionosphere. Please simplify things for the masses, because your effort needs greater reward than artistic style. Your poetry is like a shotgun looking for a target. Improve your aim and focus because you are so close...Then again you could be a genius and I'm only a dumbass? We all want the best for you - sorry if it stings."
Posted by dwells on "Indigo child" by Evil Ash
- ""a broken man, left with a half-life
I am healed, I said, but I have lied;", what honesty in the face of failure...yet, you keep moving...it's what you can do. You can never change the past, but you can always change the future. Don't give up. Keep living. Keep writing. Keep trying."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Half a Life" by Evil Ash
- "Few spelling errors that would improve the overall effect if they are corrected. Then this comment can just be deleted and no one ever need to know!"
Posted by Amaryllis on "dream girl" by Evil Ash
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