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- "This was pretty heavy. The world as a wasteland, likely of our own doing. But I would imagine there would have to be others out there like you, assuming that there was "all is dead... except me". What a horrifying world that would be. Are we heading for it? Maybe. Nicely done, thank you for sharing your vision :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "end of all " by Evil Ash
- "When I read this, I thought of the crashed glass a broken wine glass. Once, I drank so much that I slammed a wine glass into the counter. My hands started bleeding. Which, also reminds me of the part on Pink Floyd's The Wall, where he slams his bare foot into the wine glass. I believe it was from the song, "Mother." Well, anyway, I enjoyed the poem, and I hope others will too. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Crashed Glass and The sound of Magic" by Evil Ash
- "This definitely draws with its title and suggestiveness in an intriguing subject matter but I was wondering if it is maybe more inspired by the concept, rather than an exploration? The fusion of lust and sexuality was a bit strange and disengaged, and overall the piece was playing on the fantasy field for me, though proposing characteristics like the phenomenal traits of the indigo child. I agree with dwells in terms of having a cleaner imagery and also perhaps following a less ambiguous structure to create some room for the reader to study, as it is pointed to be derivative from a more particular topic. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by La Leah le on "Indigo child" by Evil Ash
- "i believe you need to re read then .. cuz i never said not human ...and believe me i know indigo .."
Posted by Evil Ash on "Indigo child" by Evil Ash
- "i believe you may need more research on the subject. the indigo children are supposed to be warriors, yes, but they are also said to be quite human."
Posted by Unknown on "Indigo child" by Evil Ash
- "hey evilash, very nice poem you have written, i enjoyed it! i was also wondering
if dr. frankenstein ever installed that
vagina on your "dark horse evangeline"
lol!? right between the seat and
gastank! seriously, this is a great poem!"
Posted by haunted on "Secret Fire" by Evil Ash
- "Sounds mutual to me. Third stanza tripped me up a bit and last stanza(?) was a complete form change. Alabaster is one of my favorite words too, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Secret Fire" by Evil Ash
- "Make that "depravity" (depraved) instead of "depravation" (deprived) which is actually "deprivation" mispelled? (you've got me doing it now)"
Posted by dwells on "Dark Embrace's" by Evil Ash
- "Ah yes, the hot mess of putrefaction makes for a messy romp with newly dead(HA) - nice write but still thinking on the inspiration, a glimpse into personal desire and depravation, perhaps?"
Posted by dwells on "Dark Embrace's" by Evil Ash
- "wow evilash, a really powerful poem,
i thought almost this could be a
drug addiction write, and im still
wondering if this has duel meanings, but
interpritation is in the eye of the
beholder. i love this. fantastic!"
Posted by haunted on "Dark Embrace's" by Evil Ash
- "oh my god! i love your poems. this one really speaks to me. i can't wait to read your others. im faving you!"
Posted by haunted on "mistakes" by Evil Ash
- "foolish times lead to foolish deeds,all i do it seems is screw my life up till it bleeds"
Posted by Evil Ash on "mistakes" by Evil Ash
- "Stiff upper lip old chap, as they say in the old country. Sounds like women problems unless I miss my guess? Don't be too hard on yourself because it take two to tango (I prefer the cha-cha)."
Posted by dwells on "mistakes" by Evil Ash
- "Well-paced, taughtly wrought, and a very original story you tell. Two against the world, nice."
Posted by dwells on "dark to light" by Evil Ash
- ""keep in your heart and hold them close, all of those who matter most" my sentiments from an original poem I can't recall now; seems appropriate here."
Posted by dwells on "matter to no one" by Evil Ash
- "This pretty much sums up the world, in all of its ugly little colors. And then to be the last man standing...Somehow I'm reminded of I Am Legend. Great write by the way. "
Posted by Nameless Pariah on "end of all " by Evil Ash
- "Wow!!! Babies born in test tube glasses... You are a fighter... You've made it this far in life, not to die... But to live and be beautiful and write and release...."
Posted by Devilish on "end of all " by Evil Ash
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