Comments by All Members
- "This is beautiful in a way. I'm glad that I came across this. Thanks for sharing. "
Posted by Star on "untitled III" by Artanis
- ""Where nothing was ever wasted but time" What a perfect ending to a brilliant poem.. I love this, great write. :)"
Posted by Intoxicating Delirium on "Wasted" by Artanis
- "Why should he when the world is too much with us? Cheers and Atlas never had it so good - back in the long ago when simpler times gave voice to ancient memories forgotten now, cheers A! Wonderful piece here, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "Weight of the world" by Artanis
- "this is very touching, it made me sigh, I have someone I don´t want to ever forget...."
Posted by Unknown on "Remember You" by Artanis
- "...that hurt... I remember trying to memorize every detail of a person who made me feel something I knew couldn't last. You wrote that sentiment perfectly - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Remember You" by Artanis
- "Oh, wait. Now i get what you said. Nevermind. I did not thoroughly read your comment the first time. Thanks, i guess:)"
Posted by Artanis on "Selene/Endymion" by Artanis
- "i don't understand what you are trying to say. i was just writing a poem to convey what i saw while reading about their story. you may take it as you will."
Posted by Artanis on "Selene/Endymion" by Artanis
- "It is like the Moone to wait until eternal sleep to slip into His waiting arms. It is like Her, selene being that She is, of shy beams and serrated wings, to beg His father that He never see Her as she swoons Herself upon Him; mortal, from whence loins sprang 50 of their spawn. i am of them. Beautifully captured, this most cherished of tales. Endymion was not as His pictures portray. He was a god unto His own, and no picture can do Him justice. ... to have captured the very eye of the Moone...lucky, He..."
Posted by Unknown on "Selene/Endymion" by Artanis
- "I find this pretty stunning actually, the repetition gives this something haunting, and almost familiar to me. Well written"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "untitled III" by Artanis
- "i know. the ending was difficult to write. i changed it twice before i decided to go with that ending. i also couldn't think of a good title for a while so i just went off what i had in the ending."
Posted by Artanis on "Let The Light In" by Artanis
- "This is pretty spectacular. Very unexpected ending despite the title. Very well written...I thinkiI like you. :)"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Let The Light In" by Artanis
- "Aw... I have also wondered such things about my cats... :3"
Posted by Symbol on "Ashes" by Artanis
- "how sweet! ashes would be touched that she has a dedication in prose. welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "Ashes" by Artanis
- "Whats wierd is i really didnt feel anything when i was writing this. There was no emotional response...but when i made changes later i thought "well, this is pretty depressing" but i still felt like if nothing like this has ever happened to me before then there will be no connection except one that other readers may find."
Posted by Artanis on "A Cold Heart" by Artanis
- "Beautifully written. What a lovely style it is. :) The ending is sad... "And so i have been brought to my knees. My body turns to dust....." Very final and hits the heart pretty well. Thanks for the read :)"
Posted by Symbol on "A Cold Heart" by Artanis
- "Holy cow. Every line brought a new image to mind- This whole story was and still is playing through my mind with such detail. I can imagine the fear of the solider as he suddenly realizes that he should have listened to the old man. WOW. Beautifully written and just amazing. The story itself is just as poetic as a poem matter of fact tis why I love it so much :) :) Thank you for recommending this to me. I sure as hell enjoyed this piece and I shall be sending links in chat for ppl to come view it... :D"
Posted by Symbol on "The Forbidden Castle" by Artanis
