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- "im not even sure what to say to this. it is quite haunting to me. i suppose we will all pass from this world having left things undone and unaccomplished, but you word the incomplete just so. "
Posted by Unknown on "An Unfortunate Author" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "I like the idea behind this piece. Nicely done ending, for sure. There's an aggressive submission here. Shades of grey, just like in life. Things are rarely what they appear to be. Ya gotta look a little closer. Your words make me do that everytime. Thanks for this write, man..."
Posted by Unknown on "The Moral Imperative of the Anti-Protagonist" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "Abrupt and oh so telling as always. Some of your poems are Bierce-like...short, brutal & packed with power in a small frame, rarely taking prisoners. This one has an uplifting ending...sort of hopeful. As always, love seeing you post..."
Posted by Unknown on "She Fucked Me and Left" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "you have quite a dry style; but those endings really crack me up and seem so flippant they turn the poem on its head and I feel entertained and voyeuristic here almost...quirky in a great way"
Posted by stryder on "She Fucked Me and Left" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- ""How the mighty
have finally fallen." That line makes me think instantly of the recent revolutions in Tunisia and Egypt..And the rest of the poem made me think of state TVs reaction to such events...Very thought-provoking piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Deliverance" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
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