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"Kills me. Ever and always. I want you to know... I carry this poem with me everywhere. "
Posted by Unknown on "Flowers In Her Hair." by TheProphetUntold

"congratulations on writing such an accomplished work, truly impressive"
Posted by Anth on "Playing God, Beneath the Overpass." by TheProphetUntold

"I've been waiting patiently for you to bring this back."
Posted by Unknown on "Flowers In Her Hair." by TheProphetUntold

"What really gives this poem such powerful resonance is that the accident wasn't caused on purpose by a boy but a little girl...Double tragedy multiplied...Brilliant, brilliant piece. *tips hat to the Prophet*"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Playing God, Beneath the Overpass." by TheProphetUntold

"Your mistress ...your demon...your proverbial monkey on the back...she dances like a cobra ...and strikes with such quickness.I can only revere such a casket of a poem that begins and ends...wrapping this present in bone and delivers it with a smile to the foot of my casket.You are both the friend and the cobra.You are the creator,the destroyer.You are every instant.My brother."
Posted by Honey on "Playing God, Beneath the Overpass." by TheProphetUntold

"incredible images....loved the journey. *bows*"
Posted by DarkDruidess on "Playing God, Beneath the Overpass." by TheProphetUntold

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