Comments by All Members
- "this structure is so sound and perfect that I had no idea that there was one until I read Ben's comment. You are a great writer, and you deserve to be publish and saved on many shelves. I'd love to have a book of writing from a few poets here, but yours I'd keep next to all of my metal albums and records, just because you are not of this world and your writing does not have any need to be set next to any others."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "In Gardens Of Grief." by TheProphetUntold
- "Yes, I thought I'd seen this when you first posted it. You are the Master of haiku/senryu. Killer string here. So dark & gentle. Like always, it sounds flawless when spoken. Always impressive...thanks for reposting!"
Posted by Unknown on "In Gardens Of Grief." by TheProphetUntold
- "I was a bit disappointed I didn't get to read this yesterday, but I'm glad I got to. Very captivating series of senryus, the garden came to life with each one. A love so pure, as to make a garden bloom, and an expression of such affection, bringing contented rest in the end. Wondrous creation, *bows*"
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "In Gardens Of Grief." by TheProphetUntold
- ".....truly mesmerised by this sequence of senryus..each stands on its own and yet they're knitted together with a thin delicate thread..so special, powerful in its tenderness..thank you for sharing it a lot."
Posted by tindomerel on "In Gardens Of Grief." by TheProphetUntold
- "Such a tender cure this love is, the release of the spirit, maybe.......captivated by love yet so free ........ the ultimate remedy against a grey reality. I really like how you put life to these longing gardens. Thank you, this was indeed beautiful!"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "In Gardens Of Grief." by TheProphetUntold
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