Comments by All Members
- "You write so passionately about feelings, something I'm very find of."
Posted by Unknown on "Rage" by Gray Vision
- "I love how the exact meaning is mysterious. With my wild imagination, I'm considering so many things it could be. It's wonderful. I love anything that makes me think. The poem overall is very simple, but very striking. The layout is eye catching, the repetition is fitting, and the words flow very well. Nice write."
Posted by wilted on "Hold On" by Gray Vision
- "JUDGMENT OF ONE'S SELF IS BY FAR THE MOST CRITICAL JUDGE ... NO FORGET NO FORGIVE
I LIKE IT .... DEEP
LIKE U TO PAY A VISIT AND SEE MY WORK
CHEERS, SIMZZZ"
Posted by Unknown on "Judgement" by Gray Vision
- "This is well done. From the idea of the mirror to the repetition of all. To include "all" so much, it gives the impression that everything, all of it is gone. And the idea of the mirror gives a sense of reflection, as well as a seeking of answers from within. Yet, sometimes even the mirror doesn't have the answers. Nice write."
Posted by wilted on "Rock Bottom" by Gray Vision
- "I really liked the flow, and it's as if this write is mocking and begging for someone to try and hurt you. Knowing full well they can't, genius, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Impervious" by Gray Vision
- "Very nice, I like the quick pace, and I'm proud to be the first to comment on it, thank for the nice write."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Impervious" by Gray Vision
- "I don't know how it would feel when you take the last breath, but you can always see how it makes others feel. That's what I say anyway, well done."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Finality" by Gray Vision
- "I've asked myself a few of those questions before. This one made me think a little bit."
Posted by Unknown on "Finality" by Gray Vision
- "I really like the flow of this one, I was flipping through pages in a book in my head while reading the words. Excellent."
Posted by Unknown on "Productivity" by Gray Vision
- "Wow. Excellent take on addiction. "I'm the heart to you, you're the blood to me" That can be applied to love, drugs, bad habits, etc. I enjoyed this one."
Posted by Unknown on "The Hold" by Gray Vision
- "Great write, no matter how insignificant the lie it's still a lie and will always evolve into bigger lies, it's deadly progression at its finest. Well done, thanks."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Spawn of Lies " by Gray Vision
- "You've captured rage very well. You've taken that outburst of anger to a new level and defined it nicely. I was entranced in every line, many of which are my favorites. That rage is in all of us waiting to break free of the core to wreak havoc upon the weak. I'll be sure to step out of your way when this fury is unleashed. Nice write."
Posted by Rowan on "Rage" by Gray Vision
- "I actually really like this write. It almost reminds me of a rock song for some reason. I bet if you expanded this and put a nice chorus you would have awesome lyrics. As for the concept, I know frustration just gets people so ticked. Pressing those buttons get annoying and you just want to be left alone. I like this write and the style. Write on. Welcome to DP."
Posted by Rowan on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
