Comments by All Members
- "However for the abuser, that pain they cause others is a deadly cycle. Eventually they themselves may find their own bodies reduced to bruises and scars, more than likely at the hands of their victims. A great write my friend, depicts abuse really well, thanks."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Abused" by Gray Vision
- "An excellent ideology. If only, indeed. Sadly we're kept in fear of each other through the use of stereotyping etc., and people seem to see each others' differences instead of similarities. An interesting read, thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Connecting the Stars" by Gray Vision
- "Counting your blessings before going to sleep is more useful than I once thought...as to the rest of humanity...I can't do anything about them...thanks Gray...(are you the one on the right?)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Connecting the Stars" by Gray Vision
- "That had to be one of my favorite haiku's. A complex image, and powerful emotion, conveyed through few words. Well done, thanks."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Silence" by Gray Vision
- "Very vivid write my friend, this really exhibits the true power of fear. How it breaks down every mental safeguard, and opens the floodgates to a nightmare world you would've never known existed beforehand, well done."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Nightfalls" by Gray Vision
- "That's the best thing about frustration, before too long it burns itself out, and that's what separates it from hatred. Well done my friend, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
- ""I've lost everything
Even pain" - what a great line. Going beyond the boundaries of what we think pain is. Right into being numb, a place none of us should have to be in. Thank you for sharing. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Shackled" by Gray Vision
- "I definitely subscribe to this manner of thought .... I have often been pushed to the breaking point .... Its not pretty because although I hate violence .... I am quite chaotic ...... I relate Thanks for sharing .... Write On :)"
Posted by theXkevorkian on "Rage" by Gray Vision
- "Nice piece , Short but definitely expresses the nature of frustration and the mundane......
Oh by the way Welcome to DP ..... Write On :)"
Posted by theXkevorkian on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
- "In a sense it is, you see i wrote this poem in the manner that i did because frustration never lasts. As quick as it comes, it's gone that's why i kept the poem short to embody the duration of the emotion. Thank you all for commenting on this piece, I'll kep writing."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
- "Indeed also some of the metaphors I used for example, "And pretty soon those white lies, give birth to black lies." I used the term/ phrase "Black lies" because people associate black to be bad, even though black can embody something beautiful like ebony for instance. Anyways thank you for your support and encouragement and I'll keep writing. "
Posted by Gray Vision on "Spawn of Lies " by Gray Vision
- "Adorable. It was once stated that a friend is two sould that share the same body, a soul-mate. When I think pf soul-mates, I think of love. Love has no boundary. Not age, not race. It's a language."
Posted by Miztaken4beauty on "Weird Romance" by Gray Vision
- "I wrote this piece on drugs because I hear people say all the time that, "the drug doesn't own them" or "they are in control" you know "I can stop when I want" or "Just one more shot or puff." The truth is that the drug is actually using them, the drug is in control. The drug isn't craving to be used but the person is craving the drug. The drug can wait but the person can't so who's controlling who? See what I'm saying by "Until its time to dispose of you, and leave you be.""
Posted by Gray Vision on "The Hold" by Gray Vision
- "You know, I wrote this poem because of all the commercials of starving kids in various regions of the world. We don't know how good we have it here, for someone to be able to skip lunch or dinner because they're full or just simply don't feel the need or want for it. I'd be lying to you if I said that this is on my mind all the time because it's not, but there are times where I do reflect on it. Just something to think about the next time you decide to skip breakfast, lunch or dinner because there are people out there just like us who simply don't have this luxury. "
Posted by Gray Vision on "Hold On" by Gray Vision
- "Forgive me. I was recently touched by a movie called precious...not that you look like her or anything, but your work reminds me of her perspective. Kind of a drama-filled life. Keep writing the pain."
Posted by Unknown on "Shackled" by Gray Vision
- "In such short words, poetry can be so breath taking, You're making one point and one point only, and only few words can make it beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Silence" by Gray Vision
- "This is fantastically profound. I get sick of famous poets being people that only write about scenery...mostly scenery. I'm very passionate about what underlies a human being and it seems you do too. Very beautiful write and way of dealing with your issues and expressing the unique color that lies inside of you."
Posted by Unknown on "Alone" by Gray Vision
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