Comments by All Members
- "That was a nice write, it's true too people don't seem to notice that the people who cared all along were right in front of them, well done."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Transparency" by Gray Vision
- "I could really feel the emotion behind the words. fear, worry.....fantastic, and keep writing.......~S"
Posted by Unknown on "Nightfalls" by Gray Vision
- "this is one of those peoms that makes me want to comment, even though i dont know what to say.....write on.....~S"
Posted by Unknown on "Rage" by Gray Vision
- "noooooooo....don't leave this life...
come to DP....
hope you felt better after writing this"
Posted by Unknown on "Agony" by Gray Vision
- "a well discribed momment that builds up rage......'path of destruction'...loved it man"
Posted by Unknown on "Rage" by Gray Vision
- "That was a great write, I used to get this kind of feeling a lot, and unfortunately I was right about it, well done, described that sense perfectly.
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Posted by lupus tenebrae on "When Death Knocks" by Gray Vision
- "Thank you so much Megann, I'm happy that this peice intriged you and the many others who have read and commented on it. I'll post some more here soon, I just need to find some topics to write on. Email me if you have any ideas, every and any bit helps. Thanks again =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Armorless Knight" by Gray Vision
- "Oh and " Now exposed
Nude and humble,
He?s learnt his lesson
A bearer of sorrow,
Hauling his broken armor
For today and tomorrow,
Now an example for those
Of what not to follow."
God I just love that."
Posted by Unknown on "Armorless Knight" by Gray Vision
- "This piece was profoundly beautiful "
His ego diminished
His will,
Strangled,
Despite his efforts
To salvage the shambles,
He finds it impossible
To repair his mantle,
From his once perfect image
Now reduced to rubble." I loved that part. Something about "his ego was diminished"...just intense."
Posted by Unknown on "Armorless Knight" by Gray Vision
- "Very good write, it made me feel vulnerable, especially "You left me all alone, in this world of knives" I myself have been in this situation, that uncertainty cuts deeper than any dagger, well done."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Alone" by Gray Vision
- "Very neat write, I just imagined this poor soul walking a lone stretch of road with his shattered armor, and it had a great message of following those that are doomed, well done, it turned out a lot better than mine did lol."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Armorless Knight" by Gray Vision
- "Maybe it's not enough to try but perhaps inaction would be a worse scenario. Learn from the mistakes of others but tread the path either way. A sorrowful but interesting. Nicely done."
Posted by Dilated View on "Armorless Knight" by Gray Vision
- "An honest and heartfelt piece here. I wish all relationships could make this promise, intimate or friendly or otherwise. Hope this plays out how you wish, nicely written."
Posted by Dilated View on "Promise Me This" by Gray Vision
- "A part known as deceit,
The worst quality in a person,
The one you can?t delete
I love this, and it is very true. Once the seed of deception is planted, as a twisted tree it will grow. Thank you for sharing"
Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "Spawn of Lies " by Gray Vision
- "Beautiful I can really relate to this piece.You left me all alone, naked,
In this world of knives. Something we are all guilty of. But your passion brings you more strength than you know"
Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "Alone" by Gray Vision
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