Comments by All Members
- "aw yes, you have an amazing mind my friend, why is it we tend to fill the holes in our life with things that are temporary, things as you say... erode. Indeed in-vain..."
Posted by A Life Without You on "This Rain" by A Life Without You
- "...personally, i think the last three lines could stand on their own; or is that collapse on their own?> the final image of rain/tears filling gaps in body, heart, soul, memory. .. .. when i also understand that rain erodes and craves through even the hardest of stones and hearts. .. .. .. .irony of personal sight i guess."
Posted by Unknown on "This Rain" by A Life Without You
- "With every re-read, I found something new. Your words are simple, yet hold such an amazing depth. I can relate on so many levels because you captured so many feelings. The ending was perfect; the idea of filling holes in oneself with rain water is such a striking notion. Nice write."
Posted by wilted on "This Rain" by A Life Without You
- "Wow. I loved how you took the theme of the weather and played it throughout your poem. Weather changes, so can love. Great write."
Posted by Rowan on "This Rain" by A Life Without You
