Comments by All Members
- "I didn't write it, I told some one I love them, and they hit the cold hard truth"
Posted by soldier on "The Truth" by soldier
- "life, as a hermit, alone, with some kind of inner happiness, wow.... that was more of a rant, I'm sorry nevermind"
Posted by soldier on "Until Then (Pt2)" by soldier
- "every time I re-read this it just makes me insecure, I just feel like I won't ever find a place to settle, all I have is a wish and a memory and something in my heart that tells me to not stop searching until I find that area or that place in time that I can feel secure and just live there for the rest of my "
Posted by soldier on "Until Then (Pt2)" by soldier
- "She did so,simply because she could.And I hope the locusts find here and clean her like a spare rib in Kentucky."
Posted by Honey on "Suicide Note" by soldier
- "Beutiful trilogy quite unlike your other writings. You've approached a difficult subject with the gentlest of caresses. You've provided me with much inspiration and this piece doesn't dissapoint. Thank you for sharing"
Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "Let it Rain Pt3" by soldier
- "you are one dark SOB... I love this piece, so well written... a perfect structure and great flow... I love to see a poet write on touchy subjects and not be afraid to say the awful things in life... well done write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The Death Of Melanie Fisher" by soldier
- "To those that have felt love, and had it ripped away I'm sure this are few works out there they can claim are as descriptive and as close to reality as this."
Posted by Adam on "So You Thought You Were Innocent" by soldier
- "one of my personal favorites, only one of two feelings reside here, the regret of not playing with my love in the snow that one winter day, or the want to kill her after she cut that deep wound, much obliged "
Posted by soldier on "Snow Angels and Bloodstains" by soldier
- "This left me speachless. So full of rage and pain. Excelent write. I wish I could embody my feelings in my works as elequintly as you have done here. I look forward to hearing more from you."
Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "Snow Angels and Bloodstains" by soldier
- "I like this piece it echoes my fears and pain. Very nicely done. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing."
Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "I Hold So Dear" by soldier
- "a few of my songs posted already have music to them, I"m afraid the few piece you read are old and were meant to be more acoustic or softer pieces, but unfortunately I only do death metal now and do not have a singer to do the soft piece because I only scream haha, your welcome to check out my band page tho"
Posted by soldier on "Still Breathing" by soldier
- "Heartfelt man..more like a stab or a brick sinking to the bottom of your stomach..anyway..that sucks to be the friend..cant say i know the feeling but this was a nice write nonetheless..would make an excellent song"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Until Then (Pt2)" by soldier
- "This looks as if spread out on a cookie cutter sheet of a song waiting to be baked..just eat the outcome..not a bad write."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Until Then " by soldier
- "Okay your stuff is definitely lyrical..I can hear you singing this over a guitar piece..not bad I've felt this before in a short glimpse of my life where I've felt as if I was slipping on life..there was no grasp but..hang in there..you are still breathing.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Still Breathing" by soldier
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