Comments by All Members
- "I would try to format the work more, maybe even trying to elude in a slightly more gentle way, it starts out great and somewhere picks up a different tone. Over all I think it was a great start and I hope you continue to evolve in your writting and at this site; I think you will do well based on this."
Posted by Adam on "First Taste" by Myzeray
- "A clever way to trick the reader. Welcome do DarkPoetry. If you want constructive comments here it goes...."
Posted by Adam on "First Taste" by Myzeray
