Comments by All Members
- ""Hard
Deep
Rhythmic" BREATHLESS; absolute, pure, velvet flesh burns in this poem. It hurts; it feels good. unbounded & chained. breathless..."
Posted by Unknown on "Rape Me" by A Velvet Tongue
- "Ooohm...this is delicious..my desires wrapped into a tight, sexy, nifty little package hee hee...gorgeous bev, just gorgeous..."
Posted by hate_doll on "Rape Me" by A Velvet Tongue
- "mm...I'm on the same page with you on this one, darling...this is going on my faves...mm hmm, it is...so much truth and anger...I LOVE IT!"
Posted by hate_doll on "Sugar Coated" by A Velvet Tongue
- "LOOK! it's letting me comment!! and I LOVE this piece...so dark, sadistic, loverly. Just like yourself ;) keep writing, darling, you truly have talent..."
Posted by hate_doll on "Lust" by A Velvet Tongue
- "man, really, r eally deep, family and love, fuck them both at times, but then again i couldn't live without them... I know the pain.. GREAT work"
Posted by Unknown on "Sugar Coated" by A Velvet Tongue
- "good, no great, fluent, variant...hmmm don't know what to say, tempting, sounds true... I just like it, it fits. keep it going!!"
Posted by Unknown on "Lust" by A Velvet Tongue
- "Thanks for your comment. I was actually speaking of the mere moments, just after conception, the cell, that has no idea what it is, or will become..yet somehow it just knows it must do..Yes, I know I'm...odd.grinz*"
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "Barren in the Womb" by A Velvet Tongue
- "The clarity of this piece offered me much room to think of the details unsaid. The brief conclusion still managed to hold important the meaning of the poem. I look forward to seeing more of your work."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Barren in the Womb" by A Velvet Tongue
- "in an attempt to leave a deeper comment. it was purposely choppy whch left me with a very psychotic feeling. great job. i plan on reading more"
Posted by Unknown on "Barren in the Womb" by A Velvet Tongue
- "frustration in building stages, a framework of aggrevation leading to a penicle of supported abuse... wonderfuly written."
Posted by Unknown on "Sugar Coated" by A Velvet Tongue
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