Comments by All Members
- "I am gealous of the lucky man that wakes next to you and inspire such erotic thoughts. I would never imagine something so, so absolutley sexual in my entire life. You say you tarry in my mind I would love to live in yours."
Posted by Blood of Winter on "A Wicked Dream..." by A Velvet Tongue
- "We just have to learn from lessons in life, and move on..That is all this piece was really about..we cannot take it all so fucking serious...Thanks for the comments.."
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "Sugar Coated" by A Velvet Tongue
- "As long as you get up, dust yourself off at the end of the day and shove the hate right back in their face you will be alright. Great write, it says a lot."
Posted by Blood of Winter on "Sugar Coated" by A Velvet Tongue
- "Incredible! I love this line.... To whom you keep running. Our little show.... The poem change slowly, then just to end in this great finaly of deception and erotic hell ... Bravo!"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Love me..." by A Velvet Tongue
- "i can say this one is my absolute favorite 2night!!!....caught me from the beginning and was satisfied till the end...all i've thought about in a an amazing poem...great job!!"
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "Love me..." by A Velvet Tongue
- "aight, all i can say in that friken intense, nice shitz :D, and the last line of the poem... pure friken genious good stuff :D *~*aNDReW*~*
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Posted by _Andrew_ on "Rape Me" by A Velvet Tongue
- "Can't say anything they havent already said really. But I loved it. It felt like... cream. It felt like cream. Soft, flowing, but it had substance. I like. #flower#"
Posted by Unknown on "Lust" by A Velvet Tongue
- "This reminds me of when I was a child and I wanted to somehow "re-create" the feeling in the womb. I would empty my lungs so I could sink deeper into the pool and then I would close my eyes and curl into a ball. "
Posted by Unknown on "Barren in the Womb" by A Velvet Tongue
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