Comments by All Members
- "I so don't get the whole joke behind this...well I do, but not well. If we were going to classify I'd be more of a hick then anything else...but I do like it, and thought it excellent at making the point...if I am getting the correct point behind it...a g"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "IM So Goth!" by A Velvet Tongue
- "s'cuse me? are you trying to insult my gothness? because you SO know I am more goth than you =P hee hee, grrrrreat write, but I shouldn't, because it makes me smile, and that takes away from my gothishness...damnit! love it :)"
Posted by hate_doll on "IM So Goth!" by A Velvet Tongue
- "Pure truth. Not only a moment of truth. Truth in pure feelings from a life of experience with loss and gains. That is what you realy want in a poem. One thing is to percieve. Another is to write down your life's truth. I love it! "
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "For what is the beauty of a man..?" by A Velvet Tongue
- "lmao...I have a green polo shirt I wrote in big black block letters on the back ''i'm so goth, i don't have to wear black''...my hubby wouldn't let me wear it to a show, thought people might be insulted...I wonder why? heheh"
Posted by Unknown on "IM So Goth!" by A Velvet Tongue
- "hahahaha! no no leave this up i LIKE THIS!!! I just love sarcasim >:} I think its the one trait I possess that I'm good at ;D"
Posted by Unknown on "IM So Goth!" by A Velvet Tongue
- ""The bashfulness that padlocks your tongue and grows tight in your jeans." This is the line that just made me gasp(in a good way). So so so true, well put and well done."
Posted by SageoPhoneus on "Tell Me" by A Velvet Tongue
- "I am at a loss for words to describe the beauty you have weaved through my heart and mind with these words, they truely hit deeper than anything I've read, Thank You."
Posted by Blood of Winter on "I Was Wrong..." by A Velvet Tongue
- "makes me feel dirty, sexy, and strong. a very solid, confident piece."
Posted by Liz on "Lust" by A Velvet Tongue
- "LOL! I was so into this poem. Taking it very serious and loving it...then I got to that end line and I cracked up! This could be taken both in a comical light and a seriously...both moods fit this great. I wonder which one you meant it to be? Hot...nicely"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Rape Me" by A Velvet Tongue
- "All of your words seem to echo with endless experience, like you were meant to be in another time. I think thats what makes your work so appealing--they are new, but they are old, and you keep them flowing. I respect you, I wanted you to know that."
Posted by Unknown on "An Epitaph of Beauty" by A Velvet Tongue
- "This was so beautiful. Truly stunning. It takes a lot to look inside and find out just what you truly are and learn to like it. Or at least it did for me. Thank you for the great work to read. *kitten*"
Posted by Amanda Parnell on "I Was Wrong..." by A Velvet Tongue
- "The honesty here is so touching. In a world were women get boob jobs, tan evey day, inject botox, and liposuction,
such honesty is rare.Nice work......O."
Posted by Ophelia on "I Was Wrong..." by A Velvet Tongue
- "I'm working on a lot of the same issues myself...except the large breast thing. I think I have a head start though cuz' I've never really cared what others think. I just have to learn to love myself. Thanks for making me think...good stuff!!! "
Posted by braindeadpoet on "I Was Wrong..." by A Velvet Tongue
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