Comments by All Members
- "hmmmmm wonderfully opaque... I seemed to sense the albatross was more akin to a chain, maybe.. like the thickening weight of age, maybe, growing about the neck... some losses, perhaps, only grow with time. Well wrought, a fun and open read."
Posted by Unknown on "serpentine curl" by boneplate
- "....................pretty much................ i love the whole final strophe... 'existence. there is no salvation. even through a childhood of sundays'...an elegant and slightly innocent way to see through the veil..... "
Posted by Unknown on "serpentine curl" by boneplate
- "this holds something.......beyond structure and source; it leaves a shadow in the sunlight.......dire and devouring. has a telltale effect. a cold wind. but still a remembrance of summer.......somewhere."
Posted by Unknown on "hell of a purgatory" by boneplate
- "searching for that clear,elusive sense of self while lost in an inner cacophony of turmoil....leaves me feeling consumed and slowly sinking beneath the surface... "
Posted by Unknown on "hell of a purgatory" by boneplate
- "that's an angel u have there..treasure her..for life is too short.
beautifully written.thanks for sharing"
Posted by natalie on "First Flower" by boneplate
- "Still One Of My Favorite Works On This Site, Those Last Two Lines Have Crossed My Mind Often Since I First Read This."
Posted by Chaos God on "Sacrilege" by boneplate
- "A lullaby of sorts, yes... but the most beautiful slumber this would invoke. Good gracious. This is truly wonderful."
Posted by Unknown on "following the moon" by boneplate
- "this is stunning.."a flower graced by your hair. a whisper on the edge of your lips." so beautiful, such a picture you paint. "
Posted by Unknown on "following the moon" by boneplate
- ""as my body absorbs the imminent grey sky, of longing, loss and love.." loved the raw emotion of this..painful, i could feel the ache..just beautiful. "
Posted by Unknown on "Internal Storm (ii)" by boneplate
- "Oh...god. every single word of this I have felt and felt deeply. Your words were like..well...I could come up with dozens of trite and cliche comparisons to physical pain. But given what you wrote I'm assuming I don't have to. Just..I understand. Beautifully written, if painful."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Internal Storm (ii)" by boneplate
- "I barely made it past the first stanza without feeling physical pain....and then, "the world continues without me"....you have portrayed a familiar agony is such a way that it feels separated from reality entirely....wonderful, truly."
Posted by Unknown on "Internal Storm (ii)" by boneplate
- "trying to inhale now...very kind words...made me smile....all storms tend to pass eventually, then just the clean up......thank you..."
Posted by boneplate on "Internal Storm (ii)" by boneplate
- "man..the internal storm...'my privation of faith is filling my hands with dust'...and 'selfish desires swirl through my head'...the thunder of decisions...illuminated by lightning...well ...this storm too will pass...the clouds will roll away..and the sun will shine again...inhale the ozone..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Internal Storm (ii)" by boneplate
- "to use a couple of your own words...hauntingly beautiful...'grey clouds densely nuzzling the sky.leaving the scorching/barren earth beaming,with the flowers of your wetness'...lordy...so good."
Posted by kinkifrog on "trying to outrun the ghost of you." by boneplate
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