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"This is lovely winding poetics."
Posted by carlosjackal on "First Flower" by boneplate

"Opening up, being raw...exposed. So difficult. I'm finally open. It's nice. And hopefully not fleeting Nice write. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "unspoken messages" by boneplate

"Fantastic piece! I like your style. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "daffodils look lovely today" by boneplate

"This wasn't overly complicated yet it relayed an intricate set of emotions. I enjoyed this very much. "
Posted by Salty Ships on "That day in the rain." by boneplate

"I've been finding it difficult to comment on poems lately and I'm assuming it's because the ones I want to speak about the most are the ones that literally take the words right out of my mind...everything about this is perfect. "
Posted by Unknown on "daffodils look lovely today" by boneplate

"...the soul here moves only because time moves. there's no hope of reaching a destination w/less misery, or any lovliness..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "daffodils look lovely today" by boneplate

"daffodil lament by the cranberries brought me here.... this is stark and strange and beautiful in its loneliness."
Posted by Unknown on "daffodils look lovely today" by boneplate

"Holy... this was so much punch in so few words."
Posted by Unknown on "Sacrilege" by boneplate

"Nice...I love the power of the sun depicted in here. Turning the lost into dust.. wicked!"
Posted by Unknown on "grey dust" by boneplate

"too late shall be the cry.' this was so simply brilliant! a sad reminder that when opportunity knocks we should answer. "
Posted by natalie on "That day in the rain." by boneplate

"everything hurts without beauty...maybe...that's when you need this state of stillness...maybe...emotional lines and very personal indeed :)"
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "stillness" by boneplate

"the only beauty i have ever known, or want to know......true beauty..... without that beauty, the beast does raise its ugly head........ thank you."
Posted by boneplate on "stillness" by boneplate

"still, no beauty.... no tranquility without beauty....... is there anything without beauty? thanks"
Posted by boneplate on "stillness" by boneplate

"great write, makes you ponder about a great many things, thank you."
Posted by Detriment on "stillness" by boneplate

"stillness...... as in still, beauty has forsaken... stillness, as in there is tranquility without beauty? thanks"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "stillness" by boneplate

"Wondering what kind of beauty that might be? A beautiful partner maybe, or something personal and inside, that only leaves the beast perhaps? Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "stillness" by boneplate

"This was short, very short and good. Keep it up...the good work..."
Posted by Unknown on "stillness" by boneplate

"Beautiful Sunday read on a friday."
Posted by Alchemist on "serpentine curl" by boneplate

"Volumes have been written about a look. Great line."
Posted by Alchemist on "Your Grace" by boneplate

"Short sweet sincere Thanks"
Posted by Slingnasty on "restore the garden as it was" by boneplate

"Wow. So, I'm bummed that I just now found your works. I will try to read, and keep up better in the future. Good stuff... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Life like heaven" by boneplate

"Very impacting, this makes you want to sit and mull for a minute..."
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "[take ii] Quietly and Beautifully" by boneplate

"'as the sun swallows the remnants of the lost' - oh my, i wish i'd write something close to these words. Fascinating."
Posted by tindomerel on "grey dust" by boneplate

"stuck in the garden... nice... write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "restore the garden as it was" by boneplate

"all too familiar... you've penned this well... and the title is perfect...well done. "
Posted by Unknown on "unplayed piano" by boneplate

"the melody of regret, shadows of missed opportunity, of something that didn't quite catch but can't let go, either. Beautiful and haunting. It speaks. to me."
Posted by ebonyamore on "unplayed piano" by boneplate

"Like the saddest Chopin's nocturne. Much said in sparse musical phrases. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by tindomerel on "unplayed piano" by boneplate

"a very powerful piece! this write has brought a change of thought .... too often, as humans, we throw a yoke upon another of condemnation .... there is no profit for this action to either party .... the scars of this action brand both parties .... the recipient of the condemnation is branded with guilt, shame and desolation .... the party that fastens this yoke upon another is branded with self disillusion which blinds them to their own faults .... well written and thought provoking ....thanks for the view!"
Posted by Opklot on "serpentine curl" by boneplate

"such a short poem with such a long term feeling. Nicely done. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "serpentine curl" by boneplate

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