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- "crazy but I keep thinking of Jonestown with this one...knowing you probably had no intent of presenting any darkness to this-yet it's there..."
Posted by freudian-slip on "mere presence" by disposable
- "You'll have to wait for that poetic comment miss:)..this deserves something very real and humane,...i also have had times of clarity, where all things we consider 'vital' in our smooth existence become very small and insignificant when confronted with moments of 'actual matter'...i dont know how this affected you?..but i become extremely melancholy inspired..and with a shamed tilt of head, i slide back to my responsibilities and life,...i think its a survival technique,..i hope so anyway,..other wise im simply self absorbed. "
Posted by Unknown on "something bigger than a hospital room" by disposable
- "(Just so other people don't pass this work by, though, change the first word from "your" to "you're"- it's the only irregular error I could really turn up, so kudos, but it being the first word reflects badly on the rest of the piece. *hates being one of the nitpickers*)"
Posted by Unknown on "picasso, you are not" by disposable
- "This hits home in so many ways. I'm thinking about copy and pasting this to an old flame (now thoroughly extinguished) just so he'll totally get the picture as to why I "abandoned" him."
Posted by Unknown on "picasso, you are not" by disposable
- "ooo wow. this... is so familiar. i've written similair works, but never have i been able to say it with such... poetic beauty. this is definately a favorite, cuz i can relate and its truely brilliant. bravo."
Posted by thelostmessenger on "have mercy" by disposable
- "o my. i love the part when you said 'if i had known there would be such a light there i might have tried to look away'... this is my favorite. i deeply connected with this write. ahh... such sweet simplicity love is."
Posted by thelostmessenger on "kamikaze me" by disposable
- "I like how you seemed to place yourself as the spinach in the second stanza. I really hope it all works out if this is a personal piece. Hindsight captured in despairing beauty"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "mistake.n forsake.n me" by disposable
- "mm,..two people looking for completely different things,..i enjoyed the simple nature here,..pretty clear cut that whilst he's enjoying your fruits,..you are craving something of taste,..doesnt make hima bad apple,..just not where you are mentally...greener pastures my dear."
Posted by Unknown on "have mercy" by disposable
- "I'm certainly glad to see I'm not the only one to overanalyze simple things. I hope he came back and your fears subsided. This was an emotional and heartfelt write."
Posted by wilted on "mistake.n forsake.n me" by disposable
- "To feel as though you're being reduced to a manageable size to fit within the ideas of an insecure 'other'...we are who we are,..as we should be... That sounds like a contradictary to what i jus wrote,...but those that act this way...'deep down' know they're out of line,..its just at this point in their mind,..they're lacking the parts that ultimately see us through ...that's my 2cents anyway,..i hope you have the nouse to walk away,..or educate the 'other' on their wayz...much strength to you. "
Posted by Unknown on "picasso, you are not" by disposable
- "Guess the safest option is to not roll the dice,...but what fun would that be!...really feel as though without 'chance' theres no reward,..seldom do amazing things fall in our lap, i try never to hate the player,.. besides i love the game way too much."
Posted by Unknown on "kamikaze me" by disposable
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