Comments by All Members
- ".....i atually...hurt fot he reality of this. the simple precious moments taken for granted...and all the love that slowly builds things, souls, hearts, lives between. . ... i hurt in this. i wish for these sort of moments.....so quietly full of passion and sight and self and unself. [tears].. . .wow."
Posted by Unknown on "teach me" by disposable
- "ty so much all! it was my convoluted way of saying--love is best felt, rather than read. your time and words mean alot."
Posted by disposable on "l-o-v-e" by disposable
- ""may it be written upon your paper heart"... I only wish these words to be true ,.. for hope that lost souls collide with clues,....makes one wonder how many letters has thee written.. ~ :)"
Posted by Unknown on "l-o-v-e" by disposable
- "so much more than a love poem,..an opening of lacerated want,..and a closing of what lies within ~ both heaven and earth reside here."
Posted by Unknown on "the powers that be" by disposable
- "Indeed you sound like a keeper,..i trust he appreciates the breath that pores from your skin,..perhaps you can twist his arm to do a 'response work'..well done."
Posted by Unknown on "like an old leather chair" by disposable
- "Man, this reminds me of my last relationship (of four years), and the things my ex-boyfriend would say to me. Although I kept it from him (because I do want to move on), I partly share this feeling. There is something beautiful about growing accustomed to a lover. Something hard to let go of."
Posted by CorruptedLittleGirl on "like an old leather chair" by disposable
- "well ty aleas. i am aware of subtractive colors and i hadn't made the connection. the thought is definitely appreciated and its a very interesting observation! the intention though was to play on colors being our feelings--the subject being love. as in blue=sad and white being the purest form of love. hope i didnt ruin it for you now. lol "
Posted by disposable on "absence of white" by disposable
- "Kind of interesting. Humans see in spectrums of red, blue and green. When all three cones are activated, that's when we see white. So to say "we've never even seen white" is to say despite it all, we've really been blind all along. Not sure if that's what you were intending, but it's still a neat little connection."
Posted by Aleas on "absence of white" by disposable
- "And this drives us to extreme lengths, in an attempt to feel anything at all... I remember this. I also remember something else, the dead don't fear death. Scary times, and this was a strong write."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "the dead don't hurt as much" by disposable
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