Comments by All Members
- "mmmm. this speaks to me truth beyond roles, beyond chores... captures the universal equalizer.. the leveling of all the trivialities, the exposure of how the world shrinks, how so much really needs questioned. very emotional, very touching read."
Posted by Unknown on "something bigger than a hospital room" by disposable
- "identifying with the quick severing movement... hmmmm that's sounding a little scary to me. I like the development of the theme, but somehow, the one cutting the hedges seems to be the only one who isn't taught anything... or is it that he's just not aware of what he's learned? Is it possible to learn and not be cognizant of what was learned... perhaps. but the voice of the poem seems to be placed in a position of the child on the swing.... less than feminist write, maybe?"
Posted by Unknown on "teach me" by disposable
- "spinach? fuck that. He oughtta be cookin for you.... Um, I mean, this really brings out the unparalleled fear of what I see as voice who is overly insecure, who has internalized the verbal and emotional abuse that places the blame for a failed relationship solely on the one socio-historically charged with domestic welfare. But that is just my interpretation. I guess love does that, though; every little thing can lead to fear of losing that love when the love is so strong, perhaps. But then, I like my first response better."
Posted by Unknown on "mistake.n forsake.n me" by disposable
- "shine the body! mmmm hmmmm. now that is raw sexy fuck me talk right there, with a sly lil warning crafted into the end, nice read."
Posted by Unknown on "slippery" by disposable
- "Wow, so much passion building up to such disappointment, your words took me on a journey, and i love that"
Posted by FallenSky on "sense me" by disposable
- "well dear me...[ahem]...this echoes some sentiments, some aches....that i am not quite bold enough to voice....i think im always hoping he'll just read it in my eyes, or feel it spilling rom my body itself; that need...to be 'his'... .in the direst, damnedest, sometimes darkest..of ways. .. .amen."
Posted by Unknown on "slippery" by disposable
- "good Lord......lol...actually, if i honest, i had just finished a write of almos this exat thing/thought. .. .so i'll just keep it to myself :)....adn this-----is so magnetic; the sounds of a something like a name from lips you need...need to soothe you, need to laugh at you, need to SPEAK YOU.....the sound effects do more than linger long....they can push yu up against a wall, pull you close, hold you gently....just the sound...and the remeberance of all you heard/felt/became when he/she said....just your name.....its a mindful sensual vvery real evocative thing. .. .. amen."
Posted by Unknown on "the sound of my name in your mouth" by disposable
- "mm,... the textures here are of the finest regard,... your transicionary skills from earth and skin were so effortless it allowed the common bond of similaritys to compliment without ever really looking at them as anyrhing other than one,... really enjoyed this piece of velvet scripture."
Posted by Unknown on "the sound of my name in your mouth" by disposable
- "yes sainted, if we step into the muck, if we dive into the circumstance and really pay attention to the grittiness of a dilema-the rest will be easy from there. its always about the first step, isnt it?"
Posted by disposable on "flirting with Conviction" by disposable
- "im not a fan of making girls cry but i have to tell you that i find genuine tears through the impact of emotion to be beautiful,..the crinkle of a nose,..the slow motion salt on flush skin,... melancholy has many shades,..i wish to experiance all of them as both participant and spectator,...this held still - just long enough."
Posted by Unknown on "weeping willow" by disposable
- "I like the pace that this piece has, and I have to say there's a subtle contrast between what I took from the poem and the name of the creator. Love the work!"
Posted by Unknown on "slippery" by disposable
- "I think the key here is,..all thats sequestered can be delivered as long as you trust the other...like no other,......possibilities become unparallel,...yet nothing is written in stone and a double edge sword has an aappeal about it thats not for everyone,.... you feel'n lucky s.punk. "
Posted by Unknown on "slippery" by disposable
- "my god but that's sexy. and i so know those feelings but the way you phrased them...*shivers* heeellll yes. more please..."
Posted by ebonyamore on "but not softly" by disposable
- ""consume me whole / eat my moon / and swallow my stars if u wish" I don't think I've ever read anything like that bit. Very unique, and quite beautiful. Write it harder, daddy. Cool stuff.
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Posted by Alanarchy on "but not softly" by disposable
- "the comfort of cold,... sometimes the things that fracture us early mold a phantom strength,..perhaps a survival mechanism...but its only when aged untolds are confronted that we find who we truly are..this left me sombre. "
Posted by Unknown on "because she couldn't" by disposable
- "...what is it todae? with all these wrenching gutting pulled apart poetics from everyone? this. . . is such a startling truth of un.emotion. . .. . the barest of facts all dressed up pretty......it acutally hurt to un.hear it. the love lacking in those loving words. whew."
Posted by Unknown on "because she couldn't" by disposable
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