Comments by All Members
- "Oh wow. I didn't see that ending coming.I look forward to reading more of yours. Welcome to the vally. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "Trying to divorce the physical act from emotional "entanglements" to protect yourself from being hurt only serves to make one more coarse and it takes a lot of work to undo that mindset and the related patterns later. Trust me. "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Role play" by Lylani
- "Yes, excellent piece! Very well written! ...I think you could do a lot better by allowing yourself to take a chance, though...just fyi from experience. Take some time up front to see evidence that someone is trustworthy...then be open. Shutting yourself off will surely prevent you from being hurt BY someone...but you are still hurting YOURSELF...and cutting yourself off from a whole realm of human experience... "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Role play" by Lylani
- "Thank you all for such complementary comments, I didn't think I'd hidden the ending that well but it seems I had better than I thought.Thank you also for such a warm welcome to DP "
Posted by Lylani on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "I know I'm guilty of that too, sometimes its too hard to admit the way you feel about someone because you know it will ruin whatever it is you have with them even if what you have is not all you want it to be"
Posted by Lylani on "Role play" by Lylani
- "...or, at least, pretending that I pretend, when really, I'm the one who breaks when she walks away."
Posted by Sketso on "Role play" by Lylani
- "i know exactly how you feel ive been in a situation i can describe a similar. welcome to darkpoetry and carry on writing from your heart."
Posted by cherietree on "Your burning eyes" by Lylani
- "... I think I know her ... and I definitely live this ... silly little thing, but it slapped me in the face, making/breaking me as I realize I'm just... a pretender."
Posted by Sketso on "Role play" by Lylani
- "... ow ... I can envision the hurt, the ache, the longing... and the sacrifice... good GOD, but that was an intense personal glimpse of tears. I started getting the inkling of oops with the "I will be", then the ending slammed home... torment. What an entry into the world of DP."
Posted by Sketso on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "Sexy, in form and function. Dig it. Great job, and welcome to darkpoetry. "But when your eyes burn for me the world around me turns to ashes" Sweet."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Your burning eyes" by Lylani
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