Comments by All Members
- "this reminds me of Murakami splashed with the raw chaos of the 80's in poetic fashion. "i dressed specially for no one in particular" such powerful lines. awesome job."
Posted by NeroMatches on "Walking by the Thames" by Lylani
- "i think this is a wonderful work oh how delightfull it would be if i could write like this excellent job it creates a sad picture "
Posted by Unknown on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "yet another peom of demontarting the bitterless torture love is and never getting the true chance to say it. i know exactly how it feels it hurts like hell"
Posted by Unknown on "A Night to Forget" by Lylani
- "this makes me want to cry. keep on writing and never stop its works like these that make someones day stronger"
Posted by Unknown on "Happy yasterday" by Lylani
- "WOW that was the best thing i have ever read it had such rhthym and it made me want to go on forever.i also thought it was very seductive"
Posted by Unknown on "Dance of a vampire" by Lylani
- "Oops,I was having connection problems yesterday & by my 3rd attempt to post this, it lost all the formatting & I forgot to add a title- think its all sorted now doh!"
Posted by Lylani on "Moving on" by Lylani
- "Lovely write...I can identify with this so much. Time changes so much, even when time is the only thing that has changed..."
Posted by Unknown on "Craving naivety" by Lylani
- "Ah, very nicely written. I love these sorts of dark works. A dangerous, seductive tone is the accomplished key here, and I like it."
Posted by Rhys Ki on "Dance of a vampire" by Lylani
- "this is a window to a room we have all shared! i can remember, these words take me there. but now i only look from a far, the darkness hates me and i hate the darkness. very well written!!!"
Posted by ghost on "I kissed an Angel" by Lylani
- ""I desire to love but have no heart". that line did it. i'm faving. but this work is so beautiful. i know how you feel and i don't know how to explain it. -mars
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Posted by Mars on "I kissed an Angel" by Lylani
- "You captured my interest and held it thru the whole piece...I had a feeling about the end and that made it all that much more of a killer piece. loved it."
Posted by Narcissa on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
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