Comments by All Members
- "I say this alot lately, so don't take offense. It's a compliment. It means you got to me, the way a good poet should. So, fuck you. Fuck you for writing this. And thanks."
Posted by Alanarchy on "I wrote about you" by Lylani
- "I Like this. You are very straightforward in your loss of respect for this person, yet there is a sign of hope..just clearly not between you two. He should read this...maybe it will kick him into gear. Beautiful imagery and flow..keep it up"
Posted by Unknown on "Never ever after" by Lylani
- "I especially loved the power of these lines (you could dance with the stars instead of shooting them down) what a slap in the face this is. It feels criminal to quote just 2 lines though, this drips with wonderful imagery. I loved this piece.
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Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Never ever after" by Lylani
- "I can't say that I enjoyed the "fuck you again" bit repeated the same, but after much internal discussion with me and myself, decided that it separated the main body of the work cleverly. Good stuff."
Posted by Aleas on "You never wanted me before" by Lylani
- "I enjoyed this...I'd say it was fairly predictable the way it was unfolding, but irregardless I just enoyed it, especially the way it all concluded. Lol - I must be getting soft in my old age! :P"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "I dream myself to sleep" by Lylani
- ""Then there was you, Quiet. Understated, Overflowing in shy beauty", I loved these lines, I know them. "
Posted by Lavenia on "Love is Wordless" by Lylani
- "These soft words screamed at me. So beautiful in identifying simplicity in love.(It is falling down exhausted
from holding hands and kicking leaves) This image for me was so, so beautiful. Faved for sure
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Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Love is Wordless" by Lylani
- "very tender, capturing a slice of the myriad of ways in which love manifests daily in the often overlooked moments of togetherness. I especially am drawn to the final line... where there is found a kind of freedom in embrace; an atmosphere of anticipation, of welcoming the 'you' that does not become a 'you for me'. Existential."
Posted by Unknown on "Love is Wordless" by Lylani
- "I don't think it needs tangible reasons or lables - I think it's something that is completly inexplixable but is sometimes glipsed in tangible moments"
Posted by Lylani on "Love is Wordless" by Lylani
- "Beautifully worded. But does love really need tangible reasons, or labels for what it is?"
Posted by Aleas on "Love is Wordless" by Lylani
- "p.a.i.n.f.u.l. to read this.there is no worse thing than crying for "the land of no reply".I like it,especially the second half."
Posted by estherbell on "Between The Sheets" by Lylani
- ""Then with breathless words And invisible ink I scream your name
And tell you I love you..." ...this line summed it all up for me
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Posted by Lavenia on "Between The Sheets" by Lylani
- "The way the sheets are two... that upon which is written the life one never knows, and that between which life struggles on in 'his?' absence; at once Bartelby and then Heloise... purloined letters one and all..."
Posted by Unknown on "Between The Sheets" by Lylani
- "This is the first that i have read of yours, and will not be the last. this is so beautifully written that i cannot help but to want to read more..."
Posted by Lavenia on "I kissed an Angel" by Lylani
- "This has so many meanings to me right now... the texture of this piece is very fragile... I love it "
Posted by sixsixnine on "goodbye my son" by Lylani
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