Comments by All Members
- "And I think expressing it is the only option. It's the ever classic scenario of "I could reveal it and maybe it works or maybe I'll regret it - or I'll regret every second I haven't revealed it if I don't, anyways""
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "yes I suppose you may be right but I still feel that it isn't always an option to express how you feel since it may destroy more than one person. I suppose we all deal with it in our own way. In my case it wouldn't have changed anything or perhaps I should say it didn't change anything after years of holding it in and now I wish I never revealed it. Every ending is different though..."
Posted by Narcissa on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "...and should you cut it out completely, stitching it over... the 'phantom pain' is nearly enough to destroy."
Posted by Sketso on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "I counter with the fact that an open wound is treatable, and will heal faster with the application of a soothing balm. The internal hurt, however, though maybe lesser, lasts longer, destroying rest/peace/comfort in such a way as to be continuously maddening. Those flinches from that inside hitch... confuses people, so they do not try to understand."
Posted by Sketso on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "Unlike the boys below I know sometimes you have to deny the truth. To save yourself from a deeper pain. If its meant to be it will be...As the piece goes...It struck a few well known notes and I realized it still hurts...Great piece."
Posted by Narcissa on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "(Its not quite love So I won't tell you) These lines have such an impact. Say the words, dont regret it later. As Ainsof stated it screams love to me. "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "This imagery is painfully intense. It made me want to give you a hug. Something that really appealed was something possibly not intentional, The way the lines (days... hours... minutes...) stretch out with each progression. It added to the way I read it and the pain felt. A powerful piece "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "It only just dawned on me..." by Lylani
- "won't let it... sucks to be on the other side of that, wondering why "she" won't let it. painfully poignant."
Posted by Sketso on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "sounds just like love to me... nice development... an element of patience in the style, time to let the concept sink in all its depth to the level of a new realization."
Posted by Unknown on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
- "some how i can just relate to this poem but i cant put my finger on it where it bites me in the hind
that was awesome very awesome"
Posted by Unknown on "Falling apart, together" by Lylani
- "Holy $#@! - if this isn't written perfection of exactly where I am, then I'm a mangy mongoose! Reading this... I'm almost tempted to say 'staythehellouttamyhead!' - "to fall apart together again" - permission to show this, some day, to explain?"
Posted by Sketso on "Falling apart, together" by Lylani
- "i know how you feel. god i remember my first love and you captured the way i feel. i'm done with him. my hearts not there yet, but at least it's not alive and suffering. "
Posted by Mars on "I wrote about you" by Lylani
- "This is why I left the one I had, for her, in a place it'd be found. Maybe someone else will take solace in what I felt. Because it killed me every time."
Posted by Six-Out on "I wrote about you" by Lylani
- "i'm agreeing with mikey, this got me... the remembering, the feel and chaos of trying to put it to page... well done indeed"
Posted by NikesRain on "I wrote about you" by Lylani
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