Comments by All Members
- "your words are so subtle in delivery that i never know quite what to expect when i reach the end...you always manage to take my heart and to twist every last ounce of emotion from it only to find that the final blow has yet to come...and when it is delivered it pierces...amazing write ~Lavenia~"
Posted by Lavenia on "A good book or an old lover" by Lylani
- "you have captured a piece of my past and have put it into words...you have said what i could not find the words to say...you are always right on the mark...eloquently stated"
Posted by Lavenia on "Empty" by Lylani
- "Through the pain we succumb. I enjoyed this piece verily. "I stood under showers Of dead leaf confetti" Beautiful phrase! Kudos!
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Posted by Unknown on "A wound that won't heal" by Lylani
- "Ya know, I remember the day I 1st read this... still hurts. Kudos to you for writing a poem that sticks!"
Posted by Sketso on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "oops spelling corrected, thanks for the complement tis much appreciated, I usually avoid writing anything with a rhyme as I usually end up in such a muddle that I end up with nonsensical drivel. "
Posted by Lylani on "Monologue of a Muse" by Lylani
- "other than "sky's" should be "skies" I really enjoyed this. And take that as a compliment because I usually stray away from pieces with the generic rhyme schemes, but this was well done."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Monologue of a Muse" by Lylani
- "You make my heart ache and feel weak all over. Photos catch our emotions and lock them behind glass. what a beautiful piece as always"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Your Photo" by Lylani
- "This was written before I joined DP. I am so glad I went back through your work. The angel audience really set the scene for me with their judging eyes. This is a beautifully captured piece. "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "You make me ponder thoughts often left alone... It was beautiful, but of course painful, as they all are. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Your Photo" by Lylani
- "This is what I like about DP. Not other peoples' pain. But the many shards of broken mirrors that reflect our own remembrance so poignantly. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Deep & Meaningless Relationship" by Lylani
- "your talent is evident when you can take so few simple words and create such a picture in the mind of the reader. kudos! and write on..."
Posted by disposable on "I crumble" by Lylani
- "I agree with the rest, very nice. I just wonder why people are surprised when these things happen - not to suggest you were surprised. Maybe it's just me not setting my expectations in anyone very high. But still, I'm rarely disappointed."
Posted by Hydra on "Deep & Meaningless Relationship" by Lylani
- "aw man i know how this feels. it's lonely but then you get to think that there's something else. and then you find it. and sometimes you throw it away cause life's ironic like that? i don't know. but i do know that this was one amazing piece. "
Posted by NeroMatches on "Deep & Meaningless Relationship" by Lylani
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