Comments by All Members
- "All I can say is, I hope I meet someone like you one day. Really liked the work in it's on write but the message outshone even the skill of your writing. ~ Ash"
Posted by Ashteroth on "I Stood by You" by Lylani
- "It is as if my past has met your pen. We live our lives in a blinding mist of one-sided love, never knowing what is on the other side in the clearing until we find ourselves struggling to breathe, to live. Times like this... though they may be past experiences, haunt me causing me to appreciate the love I have now...rivoting write."
Posted by Lavenia on "I Stood by You" by Lylani
- "isn't that a bitch? No matter how hard you try... there they are, behind closed eyes. *sigh*"
Posted by Sketso on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
- "good god, how cliche to say "get out of my head, stop living my life". I'm in awe, just from how amazingly I fit into this write by relation alone. And that ending line, to finish it off... Ivy covering a tree, as if embracing, but rather just climbing, suffocating, killing as it seeks to absorb all that is light for itself..."
Posted by Sketso on "I Stood by You" by Lylani
- "I can imagine myself parked on a bench, warming my hands by this "fire that makes me alive"... can't say I'd be in a suit, but... :) Amazing write that put me there with you, walking to the same beat."
Posted by Sketso on "Walking by the Thames" by Lylani
- "Yeah we really do, I guess that's why I enjoy reading your work so much. I think its good for the page and a little less good for our emotional well being"
Posted by Lylani on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
- "Thank you, this was actually mostly constructed out of the bits I edited out of Never Ever After. After someone made a comment about that being hopeful I was determined to write a more hopeless piece and now I've managed affection -dammit, I guess it just goes to show that no matter what some people do you never entirely stop caring no matter how much you try."
Posted by Lylani on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
- "holy... . . . it feels so inadequate to say I relate hugely to this piece, down to the depths of what I used to be. I'm struggling to find myself again, and to not apologize for doing so, and this one... yeah. an explosion of regret is hidden in these words."
Posted by Sketso on "Empty" by Lylani
- "...and as often as I come back to read this, I should fave it, right? So there, I did, it's done."
Posted by Sketso on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "yeah, still... ya know? Reading this almost makes me feel guilty, as if I were the "he" in the shadows. Exquisite telling of a tearful tale."
Posted by Sketso on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "There is so much strength of character in this piece, reinforced by the beautiful imagery. There is so much strength but also so much affection, even if you wish there was not. Those feelings hurt the most. An outstanding piece."
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
- "I thought this was great, seeing sense or logic in the face of a romanticized emotion, infatuation or "love", either one which inhibits the mind. Enjoyed reading it though, *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
- "scathing finality, but I can't help but saying... good for you! then... I can't help but notice that we seem to write in similar cycles. HA! is that a good or bad thing?"
Posted by Sketso on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
- "I fell in love with my best friend once. And I fear I'll love her still, when long in the grave. And thought I told her every day, she'll never understand. Not really. I have the same first reaction to all your posts...."She says it so well" ....^V^"
Posted by veingo on "It Was In Your Pocket All Along" by Lylani
- "This was worded perfectly. I know it because I have felt it. They say that for each of us there is one "perfect love", but I've seen it proven far more often, that for each of us there is a "nemesis love". Such memories... I feel for each of us. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Why I stole your heart" by Lylani
- "We need a few more four year olds a few less forty year olds. Gets awful complicated when you start time-sing things by tens. I've found some of my deepest thoughts buried in the simplest statements of my kids."
Posted by Unknown on "Explaining war to a four year old" by Lylani
- "great opening lines and the building of emotions through this... it's saddening yet it makes you stop and think and know this is what happens, this is how deep we let things go... and then can not let them go.... well done"
Posted by NikesRain on "Why I stole your heart" by Lylani
- "I told myself to broaden my comments this year inorder to broaden my self,...paying dividends immediatley, "a trickle of petroleum lust"...within the theme of the write i didnt realize how perfect a tangible metaphor like this would become,...i tend to get involved, and ultimatley want the best for the one that aches,..i actually wanted you to find a head space of acknowledgement..that he was 'no good'...but love does not discriminate..........still, ifya want his ass kicked, i know a guy;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Why I stole your heart" by Lylani
- "My god... I would list the extents to which I hate that man, but you still feel for him. It seems the strength of love can be proven just as strongly through its death. (on one side at least) The way you said this was far beyond anything I wrote in my time in this position... I loved the way it broke my heart. This speaks to me in too many ways to not favorite it, write on."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Why I stole your heart" by Lylani
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