Comments by All Members
- "nicely, but unfortunately sad capture of the essence. a true feeling of "forever" or should i say "never again"...terrible loss. but, we all most go through it"
Posted by RubyXero on "a funeral" by gloominous
- "I Agree With Narcissa, Good Write But It Came A Little To Quickly To The End...
All In All, Good Job, Welcome To DP"
Posted by Chaos God on "Untitled" by gloominous
- "I liked the rhythm of this...It seemed like it needed to be longer to me for some reason...perhaps I just wasn't ready for it to finish so soon. "
Posted by Narcissa on "Untitled" by gloominous
- "hey good poem. and thanks for commenting on mine and yes your right thats exactly what happened. i helped them and they backstabbed me in return. just makes me wonder if its even worth helping anyone at all anymore."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Untitled" by gloominous
- "this is actually somthing i wrote about 8 years ago :P but ty for the words of encouragement"
Posted by gloominous on "Suicide" by gloominous
- "suicide isnt really a good title for a poem, not very original. you heard one cry for help you heard um all. you want people to feel sorry for you. the only thing we can do is give you words of encouragement. i wish you the best of luck with your situation meaning i hope it gets better for you. if you want we can chat over IM or email. my advice right now is have some tea maybe have a couple pancakes. if you feel depressed find something to do. if you cant find something to do and you feel like hurting yourself, teach yourself todo backflips, i actually find backflips to be quite a site for the eyes. nice write but come on, you know we all love you even if you dont know us, arnt we something to live for? and violet sometimes guys dont understand because the girl wont speak up and no we are not all the same :). i know its hard, confusing, and has moments filled with migranes, ive been there. just hang in there and be tough. -jake"
Posted by Pureheartless on "Suicide" by gloominous
- "SOMETiMES GUYS JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT THEY'RE DOiNG...YOU'RE BETTER OFF TO REALiZE THAT BEFORE BECOMiNG ENTANGLED EMOTiONALLY...GOOD WRiTE"
Posted by Unknown on "Suicide" by gloominous
- "OMG i love it and im sorry if this is wat you are expirincing guys are jerks"
Posted by Unknown on "Suicide" by gloominous
