Comments by All Members
- "I am blind. Show me the way. It was a great piece. It all makes absolute sense too."
Posted by Templer on "The canvas" by palenoble
- "hate is less complicated ...fuels the need to survive. ...love can be exhausting and usually end in self-sacrifice. nicely done."
Posted by elisa on "Hate and cherry cake" by palenoble
- "i enjoyed how you changed your rhyming patterns...it created different phases to the poem. "
Posted by RubyXero on "For you" by palenoble
- "damn! well...definately felt the hatred in it. :) if nothing else by the last two lines. i really liked the twisting smile and universe raping part ;) very nice."
Posted by RubyXero on "Hate and cherry cake" by palenoble
- "Yeah, this has that cathartic feel of something written just to get it out of it's cage. Like a singer, balling up all his/her energy before throwing it out against the music. Write to live. "
Posted by Alanarchy on "Hate and cherry cake" by palenoble
- "The very first few lines make me think of the englishmen during WWII. . prim, proper, arrogant in dress and style yet they found it in their hearts to tell people off and then later ask them for assitance. . beautifully written for a non-english born worm childe. . .keep it up! ;)"
Posted by Lawless Fighter on "Opusculum Nocturne" by palenoble
- "agreeing with narcissa, i loved that line as well. amazing second stanza with such detail i was in the front row watching. very nice piece"
Posted by RubyXero on "Opusculum Nocturne" by palenoble
- "Brimming with life and bitter sweet bliss.
"you bore me as much
as a naked slut's touch"
I love that line. It's so naughty and really drives it home. Welcome to DP!
"
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "F*ck you" by palenoble
- "I think this is your best up so far. But I feel like you ended it too soon. there's a loose end here, I can feel it. I just can't put my finger on it. Maybe that's just me. Oh well. Welcome to dp."
Posted by Alanarchy on "For you" by palenoble
- "Again... Very nice.. U sure english is your second language?? How's the girl situation now?"
Posted by j-rod on "For you" by palenoble
- "Hey. I'm New here as u know and saw the comment you left on my first poem.. I see what you've got so far and I like it.. It reminds me of rappin back in the day.. Flows and has beat at the same time.. Life stuff... Diggin it.. Nice to meet ya.."
Posted by j-rod on "F*ck you" by palenoble
- "damn again! just the raw hate you expressed in this was worth the read. again, perfectly ended. and this is your second language you say? you put so many to shame...:) cant wait for the next write already."
Posted by RubyXero on "Joykiller" by palenoble
- "damn...well written throughout, but that ending *grins* perfect. " you bore me as much as a naked sluts touch" damn good job. "
Posted by RubyXero on "F*ck you" by palenoble
- "Quite profound. The rage is firey and lucid. I love your meter and scheme. And the reference to donald duck made me grin. - Welcome to DP"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "F*ck you" by palenoble
