Comments by All Members
- "Okay, this is where poetry becomes tricky, the divide between the authors intention and the readers perspective. This seems to me a purely transcendant movement, a recognition and subsequent 'paralyzing' moment when things are seen clearly and can only be surrendered to. "Strings detach from my libms" reads to me as 'the self' breaking from what confines and the last line its' effect, that paralyzing yet transcendant surrender. Least, that's how I see it. =) Wonderful piece, twas a pleasure to read. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Mask" by palenoble
- "Last 3 lines had a great sound to them, I read this with pausing between lines and loved how it played out in my mind"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "A thread" by palenoble
- "Nothing short of spectacular! I really don't have anything else to say other than I will have to read all of the others now =) ~sick"
Posted by Imsosickxxx on "The precipice" by palenoble
- "careful of what you think your getting on with......sometimes its a good person just intelligently hurting themselves......brilliant non-the less"
Posted by urbanhumility on "A thread" by palenoble
- "much like diving head first into a blackhole -total spaghettification. nicely done."
Posted by elisa on "A thread" by palenoble
- "wow...there's an incredible depth to this that i just want to dive into and taste...this makes me smile at the same moment it gives me shivers at the same moment it pierces...its beautiful...thankyou for sharing*"
Posted by AniDayz on "Tintanglia" by palenoble
- "This was written for someone who is in many ways special to me. Her name means 'flower' in her language. The only reason I picked the rose is that I needed the thorns :)
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Posted by palenoble on "The Flower of Beyond" by palenoble
- "Your eloquent description of the dragons makes me want to try reading fantasy again--it's the one genre I've always had difficulty finding an interest in. Still love this piece and forgot to mention how very much I enjoyed the "hobosnails" stanza--pure delight!"
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Tintanglia" by palenoble
- "I have to admit I have stolen the name from my favourite fantasy writer Robin Hobb. I love its sound. The dragons in the book are magnificent, arrogant, and dreadful though purely graceful creatures that restore balance to the world."
Posted by palenoble on "Tintanglia" by palenoble
- "I really like this--wonderful fantasy feel to it. Love the flow and the use of language. I'm curious about the name or word Tintanglia--the only reference I could find online relates to a dragon?"
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Tintanglia" by palenoble
- "This is an unusual style, but in a good way. That's interesting, because usually comparing a love to a rose is cliche but here it is not. The last two lines are lovely and very relatable, which contrast to the complex lines before them. The last line especially was great; it reflects how language will fail us everytime when w wish to convey our thoughts and feelings (especialy in english!) But ironically, we still try everytime :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The Flower of Beyond" by palenoble
- "Like an unexpected meet that was faultless, and when the sun-rose and a new day dawned, you felt as though you could never match 'the night that was'"
Posted by Unknown on "Paulina," by palenoble
- "And so it was... scribed in a rock on top of the mountain, read by pilgrams a thousand years later. Ancient feel to this, it left inner mist."
Posted by Unknown on "Simplicity" by palenoble
- "quietly aching and melancholy... the images and feel read easily and flowing for the sadness it held at the end... well done"
Posted by NikesRain on "Paulina," by palenoble
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