Comments by All Members
- "mon dieu, this is exquisite and enameled. your sight and feminine stroke and gentle colouring of a woman and a soul is so softly warming and intimate. you wrote this at the exact right time for my heart. thank you for this. immensely so."
Posted by Unknown on "Mother's Curls" by nur hidayah
- "This hit me at full gallop,the words lay heavy against my chest. A shoeless tattoo imprinted itself. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "such a unique clever and at points witty way of phrasing. you have a seemingly natural way with imagery/metaphor.. lady Nuri..it's a pleasure to read you again :)"
Posted by Unknown on "The Granite Girl" by nur hidayah
- "damn...that was amazing it grabbed me and spit me out many times..the metaphors where staggering and beautiful..genius for sure...the conveyance of being picked up at a club done in an abstract manner such as this was brilliant..paramount script indeed..\m/"
Posted by Eye of Minerva on "The Granite Girl" by nur hidayah
- "powerful, surging , stirring words that push all other thoughts away. once read i could only see the images painted in my minds eye that ur words portrayed.thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "The Granite Girl" by nur hidayah
- ""drunken soul river / your feather ink head" the words, the flow, the imagery, the structure all plucked perfectly (pun intended). I love the overall feel, the natural rhythm & soft rhyme. The image in the intro stanza is particularly nice, even sensual almost possibly allegorical(?). All plucked moths should live in a perfect plucked poem; well done."
Posted by jonLyndon on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah
- "completely destroying ending..... i marvel at the imagery and the derisive, deciduous tone and life.altering events that built this poetic. so many nearly parable'd strophes.....you have a powerful voice; unique and clearcutting. beauty~"
Posted by Unknown on "The Granite Girl" by nur hidayah
- "What do I even say to this, miss nuri... There are so many clever lines here that I am envious of; that I wish I had written. In particular, "you write of dandelions snagged in the babbling brook hair of girls with violent dreams" I am blown away by your exquisite imageries. The ending is perfect and seemingly clicks into place. You have a lovely soul."
Posted by Unknown on "The Granite Girl" by nur hidayah
- "it just made my day to see you posting...you haven't lost your touch m'dear."
Posted by Unknown on "tip" by nur hidayah
- ""i awoke on your bird bone shoulders
in a pungeant taxicab.
you were frail, quiet,
human." I don't know how you fucking do it... how every single words is stellar and vibrating and beautiful, "fresh soul dripped from the fingertips of God"... but I'm so glad that you do. It's alive. It's heartbreaking. It's more real than anything else."
Posted by Unknown on "The Crooked Tiara" by nur hidayah
- "I was very hesitant to post this or any of my new works because everything reads incomplete. Thanks for the encouragement!"
Posted by nur hidayah on "tip" by nur hidayah
- "I read your poetry everyday. I've jotted some down to accompany me in the train. You're an inspiration. Thank you."
Posted by nur hidayah on "tip" by nur hidayah
- "Reminds me a bit of the French circus for some reason... that and Venetian carousels. I could swim in your imagery for days. "
Posted by Unknown on "tip" by nur hidayah
- "erudite and slantedly elusive pen; but i'd expect nothing less from your return. well done, miss."
Posted by Unknown on "tip" by nur hidayah
- ""cafe of dark poetry", "quills erect", I love this, great try at writing again, look forward to more. Sheri"
Posted by Vampira on "tip" by nur hidayah
- "''The earth laid naked, Stripped of her blue dress'' amazing... i love your choice of words and imagery *faves*"
Posted by Unknown on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah
- ""My story has to be left hanging
However intricate and over bearing
Like a snail shell
A swirling gigantus
On my back
So I can drag it along
Leaving deep tracks
Tempting other predators
Who hungered for pain
of this magnitude." you are a poetic goddess,Nuri.Please come back..."
Posted by Unknown on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
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