Comments by All Members
- "sublime, just breathtaking the way this soars and falls, a swallows flight, to me this rooted in a dreamworld shattered by painful farewells"
Posted by Tonights Decision on "the skydiver" by nur hidayah
- "the colours .. the way you have weaved them into this and how delicately you have crafted this piece .. perfect .. truly perfect .. thank you :) .. poor boboy :("
Posted by Genocide Pony on "The Shrieking Colours" by nur hidayah
- "Graceful, yet leaves a puncture wound, nur hidaya. Just a great natural view. Love the "hero moth". I've read this numerous times! Thank you! :) "
Posted by Unknown on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah
- "an amzing freefall thru your mind.....heady within the clouds, powerful & emotive; really enjoyed!"
Posted by stryder on "the skydiver" by nur hidayah
- "You know, I read this when you first wrote it. Writes like this leave me at a loss fer words.....**Beautiful**"
Posted by Unknown on "the skydiver" by nur hidayah
- "This is truly amazing. The impact of the cacozelia and transference in "tiara penetrates lips first / pavement exploding in slick red". It was filled with many more things, equally as elegant, but I don't have time to go through them all. Excellent, to say the least. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "the skydiver" by nur hidayah
- "heart thief, you've given my dreams life. ten works so inspired by such a sultry and fascinating goddess? i shiver at the thought. i think you must have done her justice or almost. this was well worth the wait."
Posted by Unknown on "the skydiver" by nur hidayah
- "love... is it not a death-defying leap? The tempo of this is captivating, how it builds in speed and energy before landing in realism and apparent pain, the full throws of love. The terse description is compact and effective... the kiss-worn cheeks....tummy moths, a pink sky.... the details are forceful, well wrought. I hope Tiara survives this fall :) It's great to read fresh words from you."
Posted by Unknown on "the skydiver" by nur hidayah
- "stunningly secretive and spy.ful.....a wisp of hedonism meets imagination...funny, there are those who catch eyes easy enough, but to capture a soul, a heart.......a hypnotic write here."
Posted by Unknown on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah
- "the oak and the rock... what nature does to us, what dazzling imagery, strikingly ironic against the cold granite.... without give " i feel was dripping shame
as you dribbled out of me
your baritone chest heaving
against my beansprout back.
and this seed growing in me..." or perhaps, giving too much? sometimes wood will turn to stone.... like medusa, perhaps..... is there a disagreeable verb there? I feel was....? Just wondering. Love the analogies the interspersed imagery and the conceptual irony.... who bends in the wind here?"
Posted by Unknown on "The Granite Girl" by nur hidayah
- ""Yet the one thing that makes everything catch fire is not the dance of her mouth, but the scent of her hair and the way her eyes wouldn't stay close." A bit different than your other works. I like exploring the different facets of you. Your poetry always makes strange and gloomy music with my heart stings. This is pretty. Tiara must be some girl."
Posted by Unknown on "19-09-2010 Kill Kiss" by nur hidayah
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