Comments by All Members
- "Simple moments made melodious through the joy of beauty - delicate and delicious expression of ideas an imagined frenetic event with the contrast of the briefest movement - a monumentous thought played out in slow motion."
Posted by Solace on "dinner at Wendy's 8.34 p.m." by nur hidayah
- "this is so beautiful. "would that the heavens see the glorious impossibility of you and me." perfect imagery and stunning ending. I love how you turned something as simple as dinner at wendy's to something unique and beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "dinner at Wendy's 8.34 p.m." by nur hidayah
- "Nur...'thundersongs': I used the same idea in 'the sky sings thunder' recently...the same poetic thought falling into the minds of different writers at different times & popping like a tiny firecracker..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "Nur (Beauty), this is enchanting...
'the slut, A', & also "The Scarlett
Letter", the leader of the alphabet, yet
so maligned..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "tip" by nur hidayah
- "Nur...the title & 'halo unfastening'
create the vision of a falling angel,
whom we hope will remain 'frozen in
a leap' rather than meeting the ground..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "the skydiver" by nur hidayah
- "This makes me want to go to Wendy's right now and order a Grand Slam breakfast!. Sensuous and such a cosmic elegance portrayed in this piece. Great similie too, thanks and so well done."
Posted by dwells on "dinner at Wendy's 8.34 p.m." by nur hidayah
- "wallowing in the sorrows, the split smiles of so many lost souls, fond reflections in sorrow laden pools of melted chills gathering below.... this wallows, murkily, within the depths of a dolorous good-bye. Striking descriptions, terse but intense, mixed with words that echo a forlorn memento that will linger as long as we allow the willow, the hollow, the wallow to overwhelm us on quiet nights, when we find ourselves wandering in our thoughts. thank you."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Wallow" by nur hidayah
- "When humour covers a gnawing little ache...it felt like emotions of despair were being held in for a reason?hopefully a good reason...Nur...I like your name...Light, Lumiere...Hidaya...a gift of light...orientating towards the light...a beautiful oriental name :)"
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "little ache" by nur hidayah
- "I like the opening image... a fun house masquerade; the pun on humour adds a neat little dimension to this ache, too.... young bones should never know death... aching or otherwise? never fear the words, dear.... chin up, and thank you for sharing your art."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "little ache" by nur hidayah
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