Comments by All Members
- "I agree that this very well could be sung as lyrics to a song. It was fantastic. I like the metaphor you used. :)"
Posted by Nameless Pariah on "Leave me ..." by Tania
- "the occasional rhyme and repetition complement each other to produce a tone that is solemn, perhaps worried and waiting, within a subtle context of privacy, of intimacy and, perhaps, unrest. Nice!"
Posted by Unknown on "signlanguage" by Tania
- "and... such signs as those that can be obscured with the slightest of movement, a shift in expression or that indescribable x that may or may not have happened that can all at once how everything may look. I like the patience with which this develops and "
Posted by Unknown on "signlanguage" by Tania
- "I always like poems that somehow refer to themselves, reflexive, perhaps, self referential, maybe, like this one... a language of what is not spoken but communicated nonetheless... the signs we 'read' daily or nightly to find out where we are, where we st"
Posted by Unknown on "signlanguage" by Tania
- "Well done... I can relate. Isn't odd how even the memories we don't want to let go of eventually fade?"
Posted by Sketso on "Faded" by Tania
- "oh my, you have trully proven your place on my favorites... you are growing into an astounding writer of prose and poetry... well well done, english bird."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "signlanguage" by Tania
- "well tania- maybe you should stop peeping into ur neighbor's windows!! =P kidding aside, i love the repeat of the first line. i feel the subtle longing in this. "
Posted by asphyxia on "signlanguage" by Tania
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