Comments by All Members

"This is fucking ace. "meow"....Killed it."
Posted by carlosjackal on "stroking your pussy" by denver nitze

"the title gave me the image of a casket; the words locked it in... "
Posted by Cassette on "silk lined last wish" by denver nitze

"I like the double meanings in the words... emotional and moving"
Posted by Cassette on "th.rough." by denver nitze

"this is fine minimalism. I cannot do it true justice to comment on it. "
Posted by Cassette on "choking down reality" by denver nitze

""unanswered questions become unheard prayers" ... I adore this line."
Posted by Cassette on "whisper contradiction" by denver nitze

"Such loss conveyed in this poem your anguish is brought to us all to realistically. A very poignant account."
Posted by Unknown on "bleed for the angels" by denver nitze

"i am so sorry for your loss.. the emotions and choice of words are very vivid here. this is truly a beautiful poem."
Posted by Unknown on "bleed for the angels" by denver nitze

"something so alluring about being asked to dance...great write"
Posted by Unknown on "bury the dagger" by denver nitze

"this is great i like clowns"
Posted by Killerdemonchick on "another clown falls" by denver nitze

"Wow. This really hit deep. I love it~!"
Posted by Unknown on "waking up dead" by denver nitze

"I just read your comment that this poem is about losing your daughters. I am very deeply sorry for your loss, I can't imagine the pain it caused you. Though it is terrible pain, this poem is beautiful in such a twisted way. Your words are beautiful. The way they sound and the way the words just fit together and the poem is fast paced, you can practically imagine yourself in the same situation, bleeding. I can relate to it, bleeding for someone else, hurting yourself to feel okay. I hope you are doing alright. This is an amazing piece."
Posted by darknessrises909 on "bleed for the angels" by denver nitze

"i scream to the empty and whisper to none. true genious"
Posted by Unknown on "whisper contradiction" by denver nitze

"a dire derelict desperation.......blessings~"
Posted by Unknown on "grasp to give in" by denver nitze

"your language is vivid & your meter brisk - like the exhileration & invigoration of bloodshed - brilliant piece"
Posted by Riven Waker on "bleed for the angels" by denver nitze

"i'm so sorry for your loss ..even though it's been some time it never really gets any easier.be strong"
Posted by natalie on "bleed for the angels" by denver nitze

"i like this, intence and familiar."
Posted by Nixx on "make me scream it" by denver nitze

"This is pretty damn cool. Very. Makes me want to read more of your work. And I shall."
Posted by Huey Lewis on "hermetic doors opened" by denver nitze

"this is quite awesome!"
Posted by Unknown on "saint television" by denver nitze

"One in the same of slight differentials which become the key to body combinations,..youve cracked his code, he just aint opened up yet...pandoras coming."
Posted by Unknown on "make me scream it" by denver nitze

"This is freakin awesome!"
Posted by Unknown on "under remote control" by denver nitze

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