Comments by All Members
- "..and you never said 'demons' once. Absolutely brilliant! Poetry has to be the most satisfying way of taking all the toxic shit that builds up in the mind and nailing it to a page. Write the hell on.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "sleepless" by jack paper
- "This was excellent and I particularly liked the way the poem turned after the 2nd half of the 2nd stanza. Write the hell on.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Falling" by jack paper
- "Who's intoxicated who the most? Great rush of a write. I'm looking forward to more from you. Welcome to DP!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Terminal" by jack paper
- "This is beautiful...and a muse is worth all the words that you speak."
Posted by Mylissa on "Muse" by jack paper
- "this was so deep and raw. i could feel every line. nicely done. ~ red."
Posted by Unknown on "Shroud" by jack paper
