Comments by All Members
- "This was gorgeous. It made me sit and think. It was almsot as though you had tied philosophy to your life. Sheer joy to read."
Posted by Loketha Angel on "Circles" by jack paper
- "oO what happens when the hunter becomes the hunted? is the game not the same when the tables are turned?...i couldnt help but snicker at the ending because i think ive lived this..very spicy write ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Terminal" by jack paper
- "this sort of gives fire for a dry mouth, inspiration, cause for effect. nexst time keep going if you can because i was loving this piece."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Muse" by jack paper
- "This is sad...
did your mom die?
if so, i feel sorry for you.
If I understood this wrong, I appologize. In which case this is still very creepy in a good way"
Posted by Unknown on "Shroud" by jack paper
- "i really liked this, especially the ending. excellent piece, i'd fave this if i could because of the last stanza. welcome to dp."
Posted by Unknown on "sleepless" by jack paper
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