Comments by All Members
- "I agreew ith all the comments you allready got. Bella said it best. One of the good things about this site, and a "long" membership is seeing the growth of writers. Your gona be a swan :D"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "tarnishing tears" by GraveFlower
- "fuckin awesome as usual. even the toughest of us hurt, i think thats were the 'toughness' comes from. miles will separate but they can never sever the bonds of love. scars are just reminders of who we are and what it took to get to this point in life. i so need to upgrade so i can bookmark you. awesome. "
Posted by denver nitze on "tarnishing tears" by GraveFlower
- "damn. i was stuck on that last line for a bit. i like it. the whole piece was just amazing. such a great flow to it...rhyming in certain parts... and ...well i cant go into details cuz then i'd comment on every line. but i enjoyed every single word of this."
Posted by RubyXero on "the circus inside" by GraveFlower
- "i couldn't agree with you more!!! I love it!!!!"celebrate, meditate, beat skins, shake skull shakers, chant, & dance">>>>"
Posted by zanewill on "the circus inside" by GraveFlower
- "I remember you reading this to me. I still love it. I think "time is money . every moment is costly" is my favourite line. I love the whole work though. The irony in the kids' lack of education for thatmoment of happiness, the pets running loose into the dangers of civilization. Great write Danni. -Trigger"
Posted by Trigger on "the circus inside" by GraveFlower
- "incredibly beautiful. i loved the end. damn those cement feathers...i feel sometimes as if my wings are made of cement and it is i crashing toward the pavement. nice to know i'm not alone."
Posted by denver nitze on "slaughtered ambitions" by GraveFlower
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